I'm afraid you can't put anything but text in stories. It sucks, but there it is. Post it on Livejournal or something.

Anyways. Review time.

This is hilarious in a nicely subdued way. It's also intelligent and enjoyable. I cannot see how you could possibly be unaware of this, and therefore you must have large amounts of false modesty. Shame on you.

One thing you do need to work on is punctuation. You need to add periods or commas to the ends of your quotations. For a grammar freak like me, this lack of punctuation seriously detracts from my enjoyment of an otherwise perfect story.

About swearing... this story's rated K+, which is SUPPOSED to mean it's got a PG rating, but everyone uses it as PG-13. Sad but true. K is supposed to be G but everyone uses it as PG, and T is supposed to be PG-13 but... well, I suppose you could stretch the definition of PG-13... I'm not really sure just what counts as PG-13 anyways...

Update soon. I am looking forward to it. This story goes on my favorites, definitely.

I can't imagine a principal of a school calling a fourth of the kids evil. Thats, like, prejudice.

Nice story, could you write another chapter?

i can just imagine the other students listing to a convo between them and thinking that arty's mad and talking to hisself. :)

I'm loving this so far!! I was admitadly a bit apprehensive when I read the summary, but everyone's in character! It's great! cant wait for the next chapter... UPDATE SOON!

*waves arms around* Update soon!! SOON!!

it's certainly interesting... I like it*evil smile*!!

WOW! that story was amazing, definately one of the best i'v read! hope u get some more written soon! I cant wait tehe lol

Great story! What are the pairings in this?

I am seriously cosidering doing a little happy dance- can't believe you completed the next chapter. I really want to know who the power source is coming from. Cannot wait untill the next shapter is done.

AryaIHolly

This was very, very funny! I laughed at the line: School for *unusual* children - very good! I didn't think Holly and Foaly were ooc at all ... And I can't wait until u update!

I love This story! PLEASE keep going! (It would be nice if you didnt swear though =))

LMAO I loved it!! XD Artemis is a Pixie *gigglesnort* XDD

Well that was lovely and funny; I very much enjoyed it, luff. Please do another chapter quickly! You've made Artemis cute! I love it!

not bad, not bad at all, indeed, I rather enjoyed it and I'll be looking forward to your updates!