That was fantastically well written. You have a wonderful way with words and your story has an excellent flow all the way through.

I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. Thanks for sharing.

wow. that was one of the most incredible and engaging stories i've ever read. your interpretation of the four heroes is amazing and well thought out. though i do see that you have fallen victim to viewing the 'bad guy' Ares as a two-dimentional character. since he hardly shows up, that's not too important. thank you for the wonderful read. keep writng.