Once again I love how you begin your fic with a short of dreamlike metaphor, hmm, why don't we fall up? The kid in me wants to fall up! Maybe you should describe aneurysm or define it clearer so that people understand more. Perhaps include a question about it, I know what it is though I'm eighteen just, more of your readers. Sorry I don't know what more to say. Nice conversation about science it's kind of neat to look at it in this manner. Aww, Akito got scared with such a simple thing, cute. I like the transition towards the serious nature of the fic.

Aww Akito can't go to graduation, that's sad and I love the dialog you use you're so great with characterization. Yay Ritsu can relax around someone, I always say this but I do like the use of dynamics you include in your fics. Nice transition, it wasn't choppy but the "right length". Yes! Yuki cares about Kyo that's adorable, I'm not a Yuki/Kyo yaoi fan but I do like concern because it's a different kind of care. *shivers* It's kind of scary that I'm reading about the sleeping pills again after reading news articles for Heath Ledger T_T but you know that's one way of committing suicide. I like the words "My" being attached to a name, very Akito. I love the nonverbal communication you use, a lot of authors don't do that and I admire that strongly about you. T_T that's actually really scary what Akito said about the sequel. I like the way you're comparing Yuki to the weather, at least that's what I think you're doing, it's pretty. Wow with them all together I'm kind of scared of the result slightly.

Aww I miss Hatori too, this part is so heart wrenching, I'm wondering how those words would make Shigure or Yuki feel, do they believe they are the cause of the death? That would be harsh. Nice description on the emotion, your writing is so deep. Wow Mine is getting a lot but I do understand it, this connection to "the god".
Good Work
~Myst

Hatori dead? :( the begining was so cute with young Akito questioning and Hatori answering lol especially young Akito keep quoting Shigure lol “You can’t. I’m a god. How does science explain that?” hehe
Akito is a complicated character and is as cursed as the rest of them I believe she has her reasons but that doesn't forgive how she treats them. what Ren said about Hatori not seeing cause his vision was impaired ouch... this may have been a random review but I was writing as I was thinking lol sorry

GAH! where was kyo!
My lovely Kyo!
gahh!
akito should have went to see him in the cage or w/e!
my lovely KYO!!11
i luv kyo!
lol
~sweet~

Did I review this already? I thought I did. Anyhow, splendid piece. I love the interaction between Yuki and Haru. But I have to admit that I couldn't understand how Ayame would be able to go back to the Honke and talk to Akito so calmly. I would've thought that HAtori's death would make him distance himself even more from the Honke. But that Akito bastard, making Yuki feel so guilty. GR

Oh, I love this fic! *_* Everyone was in character, and though it's tragic that Hatori was killed off (*sniffle*), I thought the way you structured the story was interesting - I didn't really understand that he was dead at first, and it made the revelation chilling when I did find out.

Oh, and for some reason, I really liked this line from child!Akito: "Mother says gods belong in the sky, and that it was a mistake to be here." I remember in the manga when Ren was screaming things at child!Akito like, "You're not wanted," etc. and it makes me sad that a little kid would ever have to worry about that sort of thing ("falling" into the sky, because your mother told you should have never come down).

Anyway, I liked your use of Ren, too. I didn't think she excused Akito's behavior in any way - just made it a tad bit easier to understand why Akito is what she is. ^^ Ren is a good person to inject for blunt, kind of cruel statements that you know have truth, but are hard to take.

Anyway, I look forward to more fics from you! ^_~ This was really good!

I don't really have any idea what you're talking about, but spoilers equals love.

Everyone loves defiance of the laws of gravity and physics.

Quite interesting to listen to the conversation and envision Akito trying to beat Shigure's record of hanging upsidedown. It's very... something. I'm coming up with "human." Maybe this is why I have many issues with literature class...

Why are we not surprised Shigure made such a comment?

...You know, going from reading this to being distracted by Calvin and Hobbes and going back to this, it would appear to be a strangely similar situation. Maybe I should only pay attention to one thing at a time from now on...

... I suppose that with enough threats, you could get Ritsu to listen..

You did it again. Partway through I get so drawn in that I forget I'm composing a review.

Ve'y well done! A perfect blend of emotion.

-Windswift

Yet another beautiful story. I love your stories. This is such a beautiful sequel. It made me smile. I like the begining. It makes Akito seem so inocent and sweet. Oh, you asked about the song, "Wash Away Those Years". It's by Creed I believe. Not a real sad song but, it can seem so when you read a story so heart-breakingly sad as the first one was. I really believe that this is a great story. No lies. There's nothing in the universe that could possibly make this story better. I loved it.

I love it!! And the AN you put at the end about Ren makes sense... I was thinking that Ren was an a-hole and Akito shouldn't be treated like that, hehehhe. I love the fact that Akito realized he couldn't answer the question and how Ayame understands that Akito isn't to blame by what Ren said

You always write things that make me cry...seriously, this is like the fifth time you've had me in tears reading one of your things.
That means, that as usual though, that this is absolutely spectacular. I don't cry when I read fanfiction.
I absolutely adore the conversation at the beginning, just the whole (we're having two conversations at once and yet they're both connecteed) thing is just neat, and I think it's cute.
Poor Yuki...I want to say more about him on this, but I can't. The guilt thing just...once again, no idea how to say what I want to.

Having Ayame in here is just absolutely perfect. He's such a a guessing game, is he happy, is he not, is he mad...though with him moving back in, that made me want to cry too. The main house just makes him so...old. It'd be horrible for him. And the way he stuck up for Yuki...that's just what I love about him, he's even willing to defy Akito, without quite seeming to do it...to protect his little brother.
And how he asked about Hatori...that made me start crying all over again.

I don't think Having Ren in there softened Akito's situation any at all. It didn't make him seem better, just different. More like the panicky child he is and can be. When she's around it's like he tries to go further into denial, because he just can't bear that she might be right. So I think having her in there worked out perfectly, and it wouldn't have worked with anyone else.

*dies* my this is getting long...this is such a fabulous story, I love it to bits! I hope you keep writing for ages, I get all excited when I see something new here!

Keep up the absolutely gorgious work.

TTFN
Katia-chan

Wonderful - Fantastic- and very very well written. Your style is very pronounced - I like it.

Will we get to see a visit between Akito and Kyo anytime soon? I'd really be interested in it :D

Congrats!
HulaHula

“…Because people don’t fall into the sky very often?”

I couldn't help but laugh!! That was so amusing!

Aw... You killed off Hatori... ;_; Don't kill him in your other ficcies, alright?

Oh I do love it when Akito is shown as an actual person with emotion issues just like the rest of us. Her and Yuki really are my favorite characters.
This is beautiful Alice!

Wow amazing story. Very breath taking and dark.

That story was great then again everything you write is, oh and your making a Yuki story soon to, I can't wait. I'm sure it will be great.
Cya