 dressagegrrrl 2008-11-12 . chapter 17Moar, plez! |
 Atreyu Abraxas Black 2008-09-10 . chapter 17 I knew there was a reason i didnt like ron all that much... |
 Sleepygirl68 2008-09-06 . chapter 17Very interesting. Wasn't sure I liked the writing style at first but then it grew on me. All in all, I liked it.
Thanks for writing and sharing it with us.
PS. I don't know if you are actually finished this, so I'll be putting this story in my 'alerts' just in case. Don't want to miss it in case there is more.
LOL! |
 HinataMorningstar 2008-08-30 . chapter 17it was good. but did the kids go to hogwarts? |
 HinataMorningstar 2008-08-30 . chapter 1here |
 L. Harris 2008-08-25 . chapter 17Thank you for this glorious set of drabbles, Barb! With all of canon published now, it's devastating to think of what "could have been." I know that JKR wrestled with how best to bring her hero's adventures to a close; in the end, it was you who had the guts to present the darker end-that-might-have-been and the potential for life after the Boy Who Lived.
I am alway in awe of those who can execute drabbles successfully. My writing style has never lent itself to being concise; that yours works so well in both extended fiction as well as these 100-word ficlets is mindblowing. The fact that each, very individual piece comes together in the larger context of the complete collection is definitely praise-worthy, and makes for a very captivating read.
I'll admit myself anxious to read more! Now that I've read through to chapter 17, I find myself desperately needing to know what will become of Emily and Jonathan's wizarding education, and how Ron will deal with having been outed on the magical telly. Any plans to expand on this already-magnificent piece of fic? |
 Zirateb 2008-06-27 . chapter 17I love it! It is great! |
 Karla Manatee 2008-05-18 . chapter 17Great story. Not really the way I'd have liked to see it end, but I'm not the author. I still enjoyed it. Thanks.
Cheers,
-Kat |
 blue artemis 2008-03-02 . chapter 17This is a lovely story. |
 telperien 2008-02-21 . chapter 1Is this the end of the story? I got the impression but not sure.
Anyway, I love these kinds of stories - with two lonely people finding comfort and love. Gives me hope I will find too.
The shortness of the drabbles was perfect. |
 Violet44 2008-01-15 . chapter 17Hey
I love that Chapter. As well as the story so far. I can’t wait to read more. Please keep up this great story.
Violet44 |
 medicdaddy 2007-12-23 . chapter 17Now how can you not like short stories? I know I have injoyed this one so far this evening. I do hope that we will be reading more soon. Thank you , Bill. |
 Seth7 2007-11-30 . chapter 17i like your writing style in this fic and in memories of war. this is a highly amusing story. are you gonna add more to it or is this it? more would be awesome but this is good too. ^_^
now to go read looking for magic.
keep up the wonderful work! :3 ^_^ |
 nocomono 2007-08-30 . chapter 17This is the one of best post HBP story I have ever read. I was going to say best series of drabbles, but it goes way beyond that. Your writing is lyrical, your characterizations stunning, and the story line has totally got me in. I was going to review along the way but I just couldn't stop and click on the button. Sorry! I could read these forever. |
 KarenDetroit 2007-08-23 . chapter 16There's something wrong with chap. 17--the page won't show up completely.
And as for drabbles forcing one to write concisely--you do better in the straight novel format, dear Author. Sorry! |