 Revolation 2009-06-18 . chapter 1i love how in character this was! |
 ToastWeaselofDOOM 2008-11-01 . chapter 1*falls over laughing* Oh, poor Shinji! This was made of EPIC win! |
 Drop Of Poison 2008-02-11 . chapter 1Bwahahaha!! That's awesome!
You do Hiyori so well! And
da Shinji, too!!
I really enjoyed reading this
story! :D
~Drop Of Poison |
 iNFAMOUS X 2007-11-11 . chapter 1liked it very much so In fact so much so I wanna take it and run with it.. ill explain further in the author note but as for the scene here it was very close to the canon. Believable and simple good job keepin them in character. |
 God of Static 2007-10-28 . chapter 1Ha! That was funny and cute. Nice short story. |
 WiNdGoDdEsS688 2007-09-17 . chapter 1Wonderful story! I loved the way Yuzu acted very in character but not too cutsie where you wanted to punch her.
Hhahaha, that chant that Ichigo's dad did is something my own dad would pull...O_o
And Hiyori during the entire make up thing was so funny! Plus hirako all being like: wtf? why does he have TWO women all over him!! lmao (in my head cuz i'm at work) |
 NamelessHeretic 2007-07-30 . chapter 1I didn't actually read all of this... I started skimming and saw 'You have to review FOR GREAT JUSTICE.' Thus, this fic is win. |
 Ishasuki Mitochi 2007-07-06 . chapter 1GREAT JUSTICE?! WHERE!?!!
...That was awesome! Can you write a sequel?? Where Hiyori comes back to play again and Ichigo comes in! That would be halarious! Or, better yet, Ichigo AND Shinji should come...lolololololololololol
Please PM me to tell me if you'll write it or not, 'kay? |
 Call it Karma 2007-05-10 . chapter 1AMAZING...i would have loved to see a meeting metween karin and hiyori...but w/e |
 TheShamanMaster 2006-09-03 . chapter 1This is great! Shinji and Hiyori rule! |
 bostafu 2006-08-31 . chapter 1 lol! holy! soo funny... da ending! |
 Reis Salvator 2006-05-04 . chapter 1Enjoyable. I'm smiling happily after reading it. |
 Baka Zero 2006-05-03 . chapter 1I shall review for GREAT JUSTICE AND MOVE EVERY ZIG
GREAT, funny, and odd but stil great
write more NOWS |
 ice illuser 2006-05-02 . chapter 1is this a one-shot? because if it's not, you have to update! (more hiyori/shinji...it's an under appreciated pairing.) |