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ruff1298 2008-09-18 . chapter 5
Yikes. Good chapter though.
ruff1298 2008-09-13 . chapter 4
I would've liked it if you went all out, but I'm good!
ruff1298 2008-09-07 . chapter 3
Those two belong to each other... and love the use of the ever classic fear of bugs. :)
ruff1298 2008-09-07 . chapter 2
Well... that was interesting. :) Hope to see more of the pervert/mediator duo of the Midgard Church.
ruff1298 2008-09-07 . chapter 1
Good intelligent comedy you have here, and I can honestly say that I like it quite a lot. :)
eternalsnow-chrys 2008-07-17 . chapter 1
Just stumbled upon your story, and I loved it! Hope you'll write more :)
JenEvan 2008-07-17 . chapter 10
Been a while since I came back here;Luz and Angela never cease to amuse me;Luz babysitting was the funniest!He lost his son in a shopping plaza!Only to find him flipping someone's skirt!In time for Angela to see it all!^0^
But the last chapter(chapt. 10) was the cutest ^^
Attic-window 2008-07-09 . chapter 10
Oh man, how can Luzien... deprive his daughters of you know, a future husband! And what makes him think he has the right to... eh, chase them away? That pervy old guy! XD

Anyhow, I'm glad you updated. I love reading this story. XD
Cezaria 2008-07-08 . chapter 10
Uwah, you updated!
Reminded me of how much I really love Luz and Angie.
Tela I missed you T_T

Sal
Lirby 2007-07-01 . chapter 9
Lol at Luz and his mini-me. Oh the chaos Angela will be put throught. Then again, that comes with being a parent, no?
RicePaper 2007-06-16 . chapter 2
lolerz, no dignity left. Well described.
RicePaper 2007-06-16 . chapter 1
I was expect more uh.. angst, sobbing and such on the pallie's part. Seems more likely a natural action on the second day of breaking up. -Hasn't read DL-
Ellie0223 2007-06-09 . chapter 9
HAHAHA YAY FOR LUZ'S KIDS
hahaha
that was great!
reaversoulxx 2007-06-06 . chapter 1
been awhile since you updated this story Tela and it wasn't disappointing. the latest chapter was very funny and i really like it so keep it up thumbs up for you ^_^
Anonymoussi 2007-06-04 . chapter 9
WOW. I CAN TOTALLY NOT SEE LUZ DOING THIS, TOO. O_O Luz, responsible father? C'est impossible. But hey, it was adorable. I'm sure Luz would make a wonderful middle-aged father, but him as an elderly wheezer...I can imagine. He would have a penchant for telling innocent stories with decidedly naughty undertones. His grandchildren would scream and croon, unsuspecting. He would chortle at their naivete and rock in his chair until he toppled over. He would howl about his rheumatic back and open his eyes to...Angela, standing over him with a dripping wooden spoon and looking...uh.

"GRANDPA OHNOEZ IS YOUR EAR HOKAY UHGAWD ITS TURNING PURPLE NO."
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