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Reviews For: Still Broken

Stef
2006-07-26
ch 1, anon.
abusereally good lol (didnt read it) xoxo
Stef
Elicia
2006-07-09
ch 1, anon.
abuse:0 :0 :0 Amy and Jonesy got steamy! :huh: That was SO unexpected!! Haha You should have seen my reaction when I read it! *Screams the roof off. Hand over mouth. OMG. 'What is she doing!'* LOL !!

So sad, all the moments when Amy had the chance to go with Alex and she didn't! I understand why, though - I just didn't want her to say no one more time! I was waiting and waiting for the end to see them get together! :P

I loved Hollie's character! Very well done!! It showed Amy that she wasn't the only one that it had happened to, and that Amy could understand and help her through, and in the end it worked out both ways with Hollie also helping Amy when they were at the lookout! Very sad after Amy dropped her off and she went to the park in the rain :( :( And the flashbacks of 'Aunt Sally' telling her that she is worth nothing and shoving her on the train! Poor Amy, I could just see the how sad she was when it flash backed.

And of course I loved all the songs that you used! Beautiful :) :)

My favourite moments:

Jonesy having 'Kiss The Cook' on his apron! LMAO! and then him saying to Amy "Well .. are you gonna?" lol, Classic!

Susie and Jonesy holding hands!! Aw ..

The photograph of Amy and Alex on his bedside table!!

Amy and Hollie at the lookout, and Amy listening to Hollie!

Sam sitting down, having a ** with his feet propped up on a crate! lol

Amy going to the Boss' house to ask where Alex had gone! He is such a sweety! LOL And then him knowing about them! :P

The Amy and Jonesy groping scene! - You just HAVE to write an Amy/Jonesy fic!! Pulease! With Jonesy's wiry whiskers on top LOL :P

Thanks heaps, Brindy!! I loved it to bits!! :D

Elicia xo
MonicaSohma
2006-05-20
ch 1,
abusewrite more please
panthersfan
2006-05-04
ch 1,
abuseaw how cute and sad :-(. but it was a great story and i really loved it. cya Jennifer(Beanie)
The Evil Sheep
2006-05-02
ch 1, anon.
abuseOH MY GOD! yay! you wrote another story! i love your stories! Thank you keep writing!
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