 Storymaker95 2008-07-27 . chapter 1I asked a couple of months ago if I can use this story in the first chapter. You didn't respond. So i'll just use this instead. And if your wondering I will put your name as a disclaimer that the first chapters not mine. And I'll tell them to read your stories so they can become your fan as I've become yours.
Write back,
Storymaker95 |
 panda0031698 2008-04-15 . chapter 1oh this definatly strikes my fancy and i would like you to go more indepth in to this pairing. definatly going in to my faves |
 lolasail4 2007-10-29 . chapter 1here's to you mrs. possible hahaha! nice! |
 Yoshi's Best Pal 2007-08-29 . chapter 1Truer words were never spoken. Lovely stuff here.
(sings)
Now here's to you, Mrs. Possible
Jesus loves you more than you will know
Whoa, whoa, whoa
God bles you, please, Mrs. Possible
Heaven holds a place for those who pray
Hey, hey, hey
Hey, hey, hey
Sorry, I couldn't help myself. But do you see what I mean? |
 spedclass 2007-03-30 . chapter 1Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon! |
 bigherb81 2007-03-25 . chapter 1Awsome! Story! I loved the going back and forth thing from kim to ron and anne and the whole lure of the older woman thing tre shibby old bean. |
 Pat Squared 2006-12-19 . chapter 1I now love this pairing because of you.
Mrs. Dr. Possible is definately a hottie and will definitely be a great mentor for Ron in the arts of pleasures. I could see regularly scheduled one on one classes with the professor and the dissertation for Ron's PhD in Pleasure is to seduce the cheer squad at Middleton High.
Imagine the girls telling Ron that he's the man. His reply, "Booyah" as he runs away from from Mr. Doctor Possible who is yelling "I will get you for what you did to my Kimmie Cub. Prepare for launch!".
Now hurry up and update the sequel. |
 S-Michael 2006-08-24 . chapter 1good concept, but Mrs. Dr. P. was OOC. i've been thinking about writing my own Kim's Mom/Ron fic for a while, but never got around to it. maybe i should... |
 Leah Phillips 2006-08-11 . chapter 1Ohh YES! Get in there Ron. I've always knew those two made a cute couple. I'd love to see more Mrs Dr P and Ron Stoppable Pairings, as they are my second fave, next to Ron and Shego.
Great Work going in the faves. |
 Mr. Average 2006-06-12 . chapter 1You sir are a ** up genius. Every time Kim thought in bold letters I burst out laughing. Never in a million years would I have pictured Ron and Mrs. P. toghether. Nice work. Peace |
 Nightmare2046 2006-05-26 . chapter 1that was better then i thought it cud be keep stuff like this coming and i don't mean the smut i mean the pairings. |
 Brother to Vorlons 2006-05-06 . chapter 1I'm glad I came across your fic here, because I was just talking about this pairing. And I'm glad to hear you describe it as 'out of left field' because I've come to the conclusion that that's where it belongs.
I've always thought that Kim's mom was the sexiest character on the show. And I personally do sort of identify with Ron. So I've thought about pairing the two of them. I just could never make myself see it work. Now that I see it both here and in GargoyleSama's fic, I think I was right. It doesn't.
It's not that there's anything wrong with your writing. In many ways, it's quite good - the attraction between the two seems genuine, Ron's neophyte status is handled tastefully, and the alternating of scenes between Kim with Josh and Ron with Mrs. Dr. P. were well structured. But the concept seems wrong in ways I just can't get past. At least in "Love, Possible Style," she wasn't cheating on her husband, or seducing a minor (whom she practically raised!) It kind of detracts from the woman I found attractive to begin with. I prefer Mrs. Dr. Possible much more as an honest MILF than a Desperate Housewife.
So bottom line: good smut story. There are problems with it, but they're my problems, not yours. |
 Lonestarr 2006-05-03 . chapter 1Some spelling/grammar errors and the Josh-bashing (like in many of the stories here) was graceless. OTOH, one can't turn their nose up too far at a Ron/Mrs. Dr. P story. Also, nice job on the title and Kim's comments before going back to her house. ("Ron must be knee deep in work", indeed.) |
 ShadowKP1 2006-05-03 . chapter 1What a one-shot. NEver saw a lemon on those two ebfore but liked this! |
 RC Williams 2006-05-02 . chapter 1Oh man, this is a new one on me. I never would have thought that this would turn up. I mean it was going to happen sooner or later but... you get what I'm saying. Anyway... good one-shot. You should extend a couple more chapters where they get it on again. Good story. |