The ending wasn't as strong as the rest of the story, but it was still good because it's definitly something that Zuko would do. I really like this concept; I had never thought of it before.

Zuko is very in character. I like how you've portrayed how strong his pride is.

READY FOR A CHALLENGE?! (sorry if its weird and twisted, I'm sending this out to a ton of people all at once.)

Girls for Breakfast (Challenge)

Have you ever noticed how many women (including Katara) Zuko gets impregnated within a month? May I just say that he is a fanfic pimp to say the least.

This is my fanfic challenge to you.

Write a drabble about an OC or a reoccurring character that Zuko impregnates (PLEASE KEEP IT PG-13! NO SEX!) And send it to Please put your user name and/or real name at top and bottom. Drabbles will be posted on as “Girls for Breakfast Challenge” full credit will be given to the authors.

Challenge ends July fourth two thousand six. 07/04/06

First prizewinner will receive: a hand made Avatar: The Last Airbender stuffed animal of your chose (for those that have their parents OK. So I can send it to you.)

Second prizewinner will receive: a hand sewn stuffed Momo (same applies as above.)

Third prizewinner will receive: a note on my Xanga, home page and my Music Night (avatar fansite) telling everyone to see your stories.

Winners will be announced on August fifth two thousand six 08/05/06

I liked it,The beggining was great. Funny, the middle was a little confusing. The end, I am sorry to say was to abrupt. The end was the bitter bulb on the juicy blackberry for me--sorry

If you were wondering I think Zuko was In Character. Some fics have him so out of place its not funny. You did a good job, But The end needs tailoring. Dont change it exactly, just finish it

.. good point. ::blinks:: there should be plenty of them. And then those that get into more than one Agni Kai... ::shakes head:: ouch. Yeah, but that's cool. A good idea. What does he regret more though, not thanking his uncle, or not talking to the man? Why does he regret it? Second chapter? ::hopeful::

There is the obvious, "You can't judge a book by it's cover," or "Life goes on, even after you've suffered," but I think the lesson Zuko was meant to take from this is that in losing the Agni Kai, he did not lose his honor, even if he does wear the scar. He stood up for something he believed in, and survived. I really liked this, Han Futsu Anti Normal (what does that penname mean, anyway? ^_^) Now give us another chapter of your Zuzu story. It's hilarious!

Wow, this is very well written. You really made me think about the downside to loosing an Agni Kai. Well, great job, your story was short and sweet.

I am so impressed by your portrayal of Zuko's pride and how it prevents him from healing. Iroh's motivation is very much in character. Nice job.

This is a good story. I think the message is no matter what happens to you, you should still be proud of who you are.