OMG! amazing story i was in tears at the end and it took a while to get back to normal. I did not see that coming in the end.
Great story :)

*crys* OMG that is beutiful Ending! I totally am crying!
awesoome story!..*sniff* This is oficially in my favorite stories now.

Good story and man did that ending make me cry
[but did kim really have to die]

What a story...
it's dark, sad and...
i liked it.
Great job, really!

P.S.: concerning Larry, since i'm so not good like Ron (grabbing a rocket launcher), allow me to deal with him.

interesting story, i enjoyed reading it. great.

Okay, that was admittedly a rather well written story. Very much a Lord of the Rings Pie with a layer Star Wars (new triology) and a thick glaze of Kim Possible though. Please don't misunderstand that, I will have to get up in about four hours, which certainly says something about your way of writing. During some dialogs I could 'hear" the voices of the characters in the back of my head - always a sure sign of adequate picturing of the characters. But if you so much to let the 'Good Character' make sure its soul will have a big file in the naughty department please consider the realistic implications of such an event. If you'd let someone reign a whole metropolis on terror in the US there would more interference than just supporting the local rebels. Even if there are superweapons - at some point even most drastic measures (ABC-Weapons) appear applicable.
Other than that, nice cut at the end. I expected Kim to be somewhat get punishment but still be left alive. On the other hand lynch law is in anarchic environments at hand.
Good luck on your exams and fare well in your life.

Bo

Maybe it's just me but... I think I can understand you. It hurts to make good people do such things. To create such painful and hurtful world.
Good thing indeed. My heart was aching while I was reading this story which means it was really good.
Poor Kim. Yes she had done hell a lot of awful things but... in the end she was only a tool, a victim... Poor Kim... Poor Ron. And Larry will be probably killed by his own remorse
Sad story indeed. I definitely have to praise you for the first chapters. For the Prom. Jeez that was just... so psychedelic to see Kim kill all those people. Great piece of writing in my opinion.

I just CANNOT sympathise with Kim in this story. She killed a tonne of people, people she was friends with, she even tried to kill Ron because she thought he was evil too and yet she was killing all these people out of some twisted, sick ** thought that Ron WANTED this all to happen to get rid of evil. I'm glad she's dead in this. I hate Larry, too. Who says that good must turn evil to conquer evil?! I want to kill him.

This is just dark.

And sick.

Its sick-wrong.

Yet I can't get enough of it.

Strong in the dark side, this fanfiction is.

Its lure almost insanely captivating.

I applaude you.

Well a semi dark ending would be a fitting thing for a really dark, cruel and sadistic fic, wiw just imagine, it was Larry who caused Kim to go insane... creepy.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

I hate to see main characters get killed, but I guess with all the tragedy in the story, written as it had to be written, it might not have turned out any other way.

Well done, through and through.

thx for the great story man nice ending though i hope you make a smiliar or more dramtic and tragtic story and dont forget to tell me about it, thx for the story again

So it was Larry...it was him all along.
I wondered where he was going to turn up in this fanfic. Looks like my theory was right...

Boy, this may not be a death-fanfic, but it sure as hell feels like one. Then again, if Kim did survive, she'd probably have lived for two more days at the most. Her killer was the girl who tormented her all throughout her school-life...good thing Ron was with her in her final moments...

10-Q very, very much for this fanfic, Comrade. It has been a great ride, and it's a shame that it has to end now.
But us readers could take comfort from knowing that this will not be the last epical story that you'll write here in eff-eff dot net(stupid censorship...)

A fitting end to 'Kim's Empire'. The Way of the Monkey would always be with Ron Stoppable, no matter what. May it follow him where-ever he goes in life...

Fellow readers, keep supporting Darth Comrade as he plows through all opposition to ascend the podium and win the trophy for Fanfic Writer Of The Year 2007! May the Force, God and Naco King be with you!!

Until next time, this is CMY, signing off.

P.S. Placed some quotes from Splinter Cell on my profile(It was based on a whim of mine). The ones said by Shetland are my very favourites...he's a very interesting guy, that Doug Shetland...

...This is sad...really sad...though, I wonder what ever happened to Bonnie? She just ran away and then, she's gone...but other than that...this story nearly brought me into tears because Kim died and then shock to see Larry doing it...he should know better than that! Anyways...this is a great story and I hope you'll maybe make more like this...Can't wait for more! ^^

~GB

that was sad...

stupid larry