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| Eightcrayondon 2007-01-15 ch 4, | abuselmao! I'll say this; Lady Macbeth and Elfkid (bastet05) are the queens of OreO and you YOU are the Queen High Kick ** of RoLo! I love the transitions ... between narratives ... between Ororo and Logan ... they were so pronounced but seemless too! Lovely story. Kind of makes me sick that it's over! OFF WITH YOUR HEAD! |
| Samantha-san13 2006-11-20 ch 2, | abuseThis story is very good. I like it. ^^ |
| Anonymous 2006-11-13 ch 4, anon. | abuseAh, Darlin, you've pleasantly surprised me with this chapter ;] Maybe I should have gone back and reviewed all your chapters perhaps? |
| Isis Aurora Tomoe 2006-11-11 ch 4, | abuseFinally! They got to continue uninterrupted! *blows sigh of relief* Madre de dios, I thought they'd never get around to it! Anyway, great end to the chapter, especially since the prize money is in Ororo's room...lol, great twist. Poor, poor Sabes...lol, oh, and if you have the time, I just need your opinion on something regarding my story. It's an author's note at the end of the last chapter, if you don't mind. Anyway, review ya later! |
| RhiannonUK 2006-11-11 ch 4, | abuseI get a warm fuzzy feeling when Logan gets his girl. Especially if it's the right girl. RoLo Rules! More power to that naughty little muse of yours. :0) |
| pachita 2006-06-27 ch 3, anon. | abusehi! i liked a lot ur story, i mean the POV of each one, it was really descriptive and interesting, i like the way u descrive tsome situations and feelings, and the thing i love the most: a good RoLo fanfic, keep writing ;) |
| IMHO Nienna 2006-05-26 ch 3, | abuseOH MAN! That was funny with Sabes but when are you going to update? what's going with on you and your stories? |
| lost abiss 2006-05-13 ch 3, anon. | abuse1 word for u: DAMN ur going to put a lot of writers to shame with that chapter... u keep up-ing ur game and u'll have ur readers obsessed AND spellbound. good job. Continue ur torture... |
| Digital Tempest 2006-05-10 ch 3, | abuseLoved this chapter. Wolverine in Storm bed, now that was kink, very kink. LOL. And all the "convenient" reasons he had to be in her bed. Very, very kink. I have this newfound "love" for Sabretooth I blame my friends for this. And even though, he's pretty creepy in this fic, he still gets some infanity from me. He's awful attentive of the ladies, though. LOL. Loved the extra perspective from Remy. Nice with just the right stopping point to make the mind run while. Late night babbling after a rather silly musing session with the friends; you get the fallout from it, sorry. :D |
| RhiannonUK 2006-05-09 ch 3, | abuseDamn! Ya did it again! Left off just as things were becoming interesting - I mean even more interesting (grin). RoLo works so well. They're the perfect combination. Who gives a stuff what Marvel do when there are stories like this to read? |
| Eightcrayondon 2006-05-09 ch 3, | abuseYou so NASTY! I love Logans uncheck audacity, I'm sitting in my office reading this and smiling so freakin' big ... my employees think I'm high on crack. This is so good! So "bold", I'm sure that despite her couriousty that she wanted to smack his face straight. Sabertooth is a pervert. Ick. I hate Gambit, therefore I won't comment on his involvment ... I also hate Rogue (sometimes) so I won't comment on her either. This story is getting really good ... and if it's as good for Storm as I'm thinking it is ... well I won't go on. This story is so good. Why are you so good. I feel like a weird freak fan or something. Good job though. Keep up the good work. |
| Isis Aurora Tomoe 2006-05-09 ch 3, | abuseWhoo-hoo the *action*! Lovin it, my friend, definitely lovin it. I wonder if they'll be able to continue uninterrupted? Hm...guess I'll have to wait and see to find out, huh? Good luck on the next chapter (not that you need it) |
| Eightcrayondon 2006-05-08 ch 2, | abuseYou are freakin' crazy talented. I don't even understand how someone can be this good. How well you volley back an forth between personalities. I love this portrayal of Storm ... we rarely get to see wry, sarcastic, naughty Storm and I'm loving it. Then there's your Wolverine ... this is the Wolverine that fans love! This story is so freakin' good Darlin. I was seriously sitting her amazed by it. Also ... I didn't plagerize you in the end so I am ok now. Lol. I feel like I should thank you for another great story. You rock! |
| Eightcrayondon 2006-05-08 ch 1, | abuseHey, I'm a bit disturbed because this story is oddly paralell to the story I just posted. Everyone will think that I'm a plagarist! Lol. I swear if when I read the next chapter it's like my story I'm taking mine down ... somehow I had to have stolen this from you! Lol. So anyway. I really like it ... I like the casual flirting, the issues with Emma and Scott. I like you writing in first person (which I find more ammusing because I wrote this story of mine in 3rd person). This is all too funny. I swear read the first paragraph and you'll die. Anyway you're the best again ... of course. I'm not understanding though why you aren't entering the contest at SWOTX! I won't be a judge if you enter ... because in my mind no one compares but still ... you're one of the best out there. I loved this story again ... stop copying me before I get the idea though! lol. J/K. You rock! |
| Jettanna 2006-05-07 ch 2, | abusewell written, Can't wait for more. |