Another nicely written chapter!
Hope the next update will be soon!

I love this idea for a story so far and I can see its already getting interesting.

Great job and please update soon!

please update quickly! this story is a very interesting spin on pride and prejudice! don't abandon this story!

very cute!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

This is such a cool way of doing the story! I saw the show when I was in Scotland and am excited to see what you do with it. As for an idea (you don't have to use it if it doesn't appeal to you) I was thinking that you could do some event about risks or self-confidence. Like jumping out of a plane. Lol a little out there but it'd be interesting and I think Lizzy'd totally dominate it. Keep it up, looking forward to the update!
~Dolphin Dreamer

I love your story so far and hope you'll update soon!

Hey
Wow this is certainly a different story. Did you get the idea off Australian Princess? Yes i am from Australia and i am sad to say i have watched some of the shows though they are pretty stupid. I mean besides the entire 'learning etiqutte' thing what was the point? It's not like they were going to become real princesses is it? Plus they are deciding to make SEQUELS! I mean dude... sequels? Then what's the point of the title of Australian Princess anyway? Well whatever
Keep up with the good work
Update soon!

wow!
this is such a fantastic idea for a story!!

Reality tv is definately not all that its cracked up to be (esp for those on the show) I cant wait to see what mayhem awaits!

cheers!

Hey, I think this story is awesome. it's so different and that's what kept me hooked. i hope you write abou charles and william talking and his personal thoughts especially about beth. i wanna know what he's THINKING! not to be an idiot b/c i lack a love life, it will be awesome if somehow during the competition that william and beth do kiss behind the bushes. i'm loving the story so please update soon.

Still very cute! I am ready for them to meet the escorts.. bring it on :)

I'm not sure I like the fact that Beth and Jane would be vain enough to enter a competition like this, but hey, I'm not writing it, and it's a pretty awesome idea. It will be interesting to see how it pans out. More soon, ja?
~Pen~

This is such a great story so creative and suspenseful. I can't wait to read the ending! Update soon, Good Luck!

You must continue!

Wow, i really like this. I actually started a reality tv p&p amusement-esk thing(Just for kicks) but it was rather tragic. Yours seems much more like the real deal and i cant wait to see how this plays out! Keep writing