I hope you update soon

continue your fan fiction dude!! i want 2 no what happens...

nice

...Wow! This is the first Love Hina/Predator fic I've ever read, and I'm proud to say that it's excellent. Who'd ever expect wimpy ol' Keitaro of being a predator? I've never seen the movies myself, but I did read an excellent Naruto crossover where they said that after a hunt the predator takes the skull as a trophy. Just thought that I'd share that. I sincerely hope that you'll continue this, and look foreward to the next chapter - whenever you decide to post it. Anyway, keep up the good work and


PLEASE UPDATE!

The third unfinished Love Hina fic I've read from ya...

Again, nice concept and please update =(

I like please contiune also please be kei/tsu

Hey DDK loved the story, i WANT you to continue

With Respect Ardias

It seems pretty good. Could use a little work, but is still nice.

Well, well, well...interesting work, soldier. Very interesting indeed...I tell ya, I wasn't expecting Keitaro BEING the thing, but...good work. Let's see what Keitaro has in store for the girls...(Evil grin) It's definetely worth continuing.

I want Naru-Bashing! That's an order, marine!
Semper-Fi! Carry on!

Please oh please continue! YOU HAVE TO OR I"LL DESTROY YOUR HOUSE WITH MY IMAGINARY DONUT BOMBS!

Good story please keep it going

Cool Crossover. Id like to read more chapters. Plz keep it up.

Very Interesting. Lets see another chapter

Hope you continue this story because it is a great start

Another good story hope you update this one and the rest soon I enjoy reading them.