Well written! They stay true to the original, but they don't sound like a summary either. Luthien is one of my favorite characters :)

This is a nice set of snippets! It's lovely to see someone dealing with the lives of Luthien and Beren. Thank you!

I'm glad you chose this story to write about. It is most definetely my favourite in the Silmarillion. It is the most romantic and adventurous of the stories told, save of Turin Turambar, which, to my disappointment, had a sad ending.

Very beautiful. Luthien has always been one of my favorite characters and you do her and her love for Beren very well.