You've captured Draco's character very, very well. ;)
I'm envious.
The whole scene just seemed very... /canon/, and Pansy's emotions were very well described.
I can't explain to you how much I loved this.
*favorittess*

Excellent, as always. The description is detailed with hints of comedy, while the emotion is well-played and perfectly directed. If I could have one complaint (and I have to have one - sorry), it would be that the characters speak English far too well for modern teenagers. A minor point, however.

That was extremely well written. You did a brilliant job on capturing the character's feeling as well as creating an intense atmosphere around the two: there don't seem to be very many writers around now who are able to do that, you know? Keep up the good work.

Excellent. I'm looking forward to your other series. The stress has obviously gotten to poor Draco - all isolated and alone.

You actually made me like Pansy! I'm impressed. Draco certainly can be mean when he's scared.

Sorry for such a short review, I couldn't think of much to say.

I'm glad you posted this one! I had forgotten how good it is!

I so like your characterization of Pansy, and of course Draco!

Wonderful!

Nice to see a Pansy POV on that night. And she can't be thicker than a concussed troll, or Snape would never have made her a prefect.

Maybe she wasn't there because he wouldn't let her be. Malfoy's friends got a nasty shock at the end of HBP. When I finally get around to writing my third chapter of "Crabbe", I'll explore how some of them cope.

Very nice! :)

wow really angsty adn intense...i luv it! u really made me feel for them both.