 Schiff Thomas 2008-07-21 . chapter 6please continue! |
 GuesssWho 2007-01-30 . chapter 6Continue this, please? |
 GuesssWho 2006-11-07 . chapter 1I rather thought that the Ghost Twins were as old as the Mero. |
 Yersi Fanel 2006-07-17 . chapter 6I'm glad you continue! I like your story a lot, hurray for the Twins! I like how Persephone it's showing a kind of mother instic with them. |
 sirocco.flow 2006-07-04 . chapter 6OMG, it's mini-Seraph!! Lol xD Bless...
I like the way you've shown all Mero's henchies as kids, it helps put everything back in context. Nice work, looking forward to the next update =)
xx Sirocco xx |
 Yersi Fanel 2006-06-01 . chapter 3I like your story, I love the Twins so I'm happy you write this one, continue! |
 sirocco.flow 2006-05-28 . chapter 3omg, e! I haven't been on FFN for soo long, then I finally had time to come back on and found this in the new releases... it's looking really cool so far, cannot wait to read more!
Update soon pretty please! =D |
 bekypowriter 2006-05-17 . chapter 3 OUCH!! Mean Mero. I didn't like him in the movie, and I don't like him now. However, I am sad that the Twins weren't in the first Matrix as well as the second. That would've been nice. Anyway, how are they going to get out of this? Are Abraham and Vevina going to die? Make it happy soon, 'kay? |
 Tim.S-and-Pyro.M.T.E 2006-05-17 . chapter 3Hello again... though you don't know me by this name i am also known as Discombobulatedchhez on deviantart. Anyhoo just telling you that this story so far Rox. I love twinsfics and you have produced the most on the site. I am now your biggest fan and stalker! Lol. Please keep up the fantastic work. |
 bekypowriter 2006-05-15 . chapter 2 Hmm. With Agents around, I doubt any family of programs will stay together. Gives me the shivers. Oh, update soon? |
 Matrix Refugee 2006-05-04 . chapter 1Wow. Before I go any further, I have to come clean and admit that when I saw the summary for this, I was a bit worried that this story might be one of those silly "everyone's in high school!" fanfics that show up here once in a while -- mind you, that kind of story could be really good if the writer was really careful.
But I clicked the link and read the fic... and wow! You really have a grasp of the plight of the Exiles and how hard it is for them to hide in plain sight among the humans. I'm looking forward to seeing more of this, but take all the time you need to right it well!
You mentioned Widow's Moor... by any chance, do you play the Matrix Online game? |