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| breeza13 2008-02-24 ch 1, | abuse:)! This was so cute, and Hannah didn't leave Hogwarts in this one, I really love it! |
| IheartFredWeasley 2007-05-04 ch 1, | abuseGood. No wait better than good. Awesome. Excellent. I love this story...Is there any possibiliy of you writing another chapter to this? Itreally is a great story :) |
| 100-percent-Harry-Potter-ob... 2007-02-10 ch 1, | abuseBored of my L/J reading today, I ventured out into the world of E/H. However, what I found was beyond any expectation I ever dreamed of. Your story was absolutely awe-inspiring. Keep up the magnificent work. ~100-percent-HP-obsessed |
| Alahria Silvermoon 2007-01-29 ch 1, | abuseWell I liked it. A lot. It was just so raw and real. You did a really great job. It's a pity that it's only a one-shot. I personally think this story has potential, and could go very far. xoxo ~Kath~ |
| Bella 2006-12-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was beautiful ! There's a sore lack of good Ernie/Hannah fics around, so it's nice to find one that's so well-written. Normally the whole cutting thing really puts me off because fics drown in all the emo-ness, but Ernie's cutting was really beautifully woven in with his personality. Good job, I hope to read more from you! |
| Imperial Princess 2006-09-17 ch 1, | abuseOh my gosh... that was so sad but so sweet... The ending - I just love the ending... x x x |
| Mrs Pierre Bouvier 2006-06-22 ch 1, | abuseIt made me sad which is very rare. It was such a good story. You are a very good author. |
| lnbear2004 2006-05-28 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good, i never would have thought that Ernie was so... thoughtful isn't the right word... emotional? In just one chapter you managed to make Ernie a multi-dimensional personality, something most authors have trouble doing in ten chapters. And you managed to start an amazing story while you were at it. Keep going and good luck. LNPR |
| Crookshanks22 2006-05-02 ch 1, | abuseI'm so glad to see someone writing more Hannah-Ernie. I like Ernie's cluelessness, his inability (early in the story) to articulate his feelings for her and his awareness of the gap between daydream and reality. I also like the playful interpersonal dynamics of the Herbology class. This story could use some more editing-- you have clearly put some thought into the language and imagery, but there's much more you could do with it. Be careful to use the correct prepositions, etc., and don't overuse modifiers. Long live Hufflepuff! |
| Nikki137 2006-05-02 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good actually, it surprised me. I never look at the not main characters that way. The end was the best though. |
| SmaryK 2006-05-02 ch 1, | abuseThis was such an excellent story. You really captured the characters. And it was so wonderfully tragic! I loved it. Minor spelling errors, but that's it. Well done! |