Wow. I really like this! I somehow missed it before, so I appreciate the update. I hope you're going to continue... soon, yes?? Where do Kaylee and Simon stand? I'm curious as to why this doesn't upset her. Or does she have her own reasons for not being reactionary??

I like this story...keep up the good work.

I see you took the advice of Inara having competition. Or did you plan that all along? Whatever. Anyway, good ** you got going.

Oeh! I like it! :D

Interesting I think. Would this new girl be in competition with Kaylee or Inara?

Good premise, but I'd like to see more of the script before I tell you what I truly think of it.