 marc 2010-01-03 . chapter 5 good story, well written, keep up the good work! |
 Alman626 2010-01-03 . chapter 80good chapter update, though you seem to have a typo error at the begining. you seem to have mispelt "Goten' as "Gohan" you gonna correct it? |
 maty 2010-01-03 . chapter 19 hola asta ahora es genial eyy les puedes poner las colas a todos y que aprenda goku y gohan a controlarlo de el ozaru que sea como un deseo a shen long |
 omnipotent Porunga 2010-01-03 . chapter 80Happy New Year...
Peanut & Trunks are so cute... |
 xzavx 2010-01-03 . chapter 80sweet!! an update!! ...no...Raditz...no... |
 Alman626 2009-11-15 . chapter 79I guess for the M.vegeta vs Goku part you should just describe the fight and dialogue as it happened in the series but jus alternate Vegeta's Rants when he has Goku pinned so it reflects on the events in your story! :) |
 xzavx 2009-11-14 . chapter 79woah! close one! anyway great chapter! cant wait for the next one! |
 omnipotent Porunga 2009-11-13 . chapter 79Goku/Raddiz fusion makes more sense as they are biological brothers, they are bound to be more compatible genetically. |
 camodaddy 2009-11-13 . chapter 79 I say put your spin on it you have done good up to this point. |
 Alman626 2009-11-05 . chapter 78poor Nappa! :(
At least he blew-up for noble reasons! :)
BTW which majin buu theme is it?
Is it the super buu one? Cus thats my favourite! XD |
 xzavx 2009-10-28 . chapter 78LOL you do? XD anyway what took so long to update? |
 omnipotent Porunga 2009-10-27 . chapter 78looking forward to the main fight...
upto what point are you going to continue this fic - end at DBZ, or continue to DBGT? |
 xzavx 2009-10-06 . chapter 77uh oh...and yeah,but in a way,he deserves it XD |
 Alman626 2009-10-05 . chapter 77Ha ha ha!
Nice update, with Raditz's halucination.
Too bad about king-kai though! :S
Any chance he's gonna act slightly more serious as the series progresses? |
 omnipotent Porunga 2009-10-04 . chapter 77King Kai and his humour *groans*
well, things are pretty interesting now... |