SO KAWAII!LOVE IT!

oh i loved this. if anyone ever tells me again that ichigo and rukia aren't going to end up together, i'll show them this. everything fits! i won't be surprised if this is the real metaphor behind bleach!! good job, keep writing! :D

Haha! I love it!

aw cute story ^-^ i really enjoyed ready it

I really enjoyed this, a good short read. Just loved how you made the contrast of the winter/moon & the summer/sun and weaved it into the story. Thanks for a good read. IchiRuki FTW!!

UWAH. One word. ADORABLE!

that was very cute! and the story! wonderful!

awesome story! So sweet actually. White moon n black sun... Wew.. I love ur story very much..

O! -flails- How can you people write so well?

awesome :) beautifully written

-cherri

hahha very nice and exciting!

If you enjoyed writing it, I enjoy reading it so much XD

Ah, so Ichigo realised, huh? ^_^ That's sweet!!

I love it so much, and the way you turn their story into fairytale is awesome. :D

I hope that it will end with 'They happily lived ever after' XD

omg that was so cute i so loved it one of my favs
that was great keep writing
-ChEsE

a very sweet story...

That was plainly adorable. It gave me warm goosebumps, if there's any at all. >.> ;;

But yeah, I like it.