u kno, when u have a miscarriage, u dont really find out til the bay is stillborn, or a doctor tells u...
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! its sorta confusing tho...

update soon

I really like this story. i think you should keep going

I liked it! Please update soon. I want to know what happens.

luv it, luv it, luv it! plz plz plz continue! please!

I love your story please keep writing. update as soon as you can please. three thumbs up
great job. i usually don`t respond to stories unless I think they are really good so please update as soon as you can. great job.

FIERCE! loved it!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!

*Cam*

what's happenin?

that was good!

I LOVED IT! i actually laughed out loud when jack was being sarcastic because i could see it happening! anyway loved the chapter please update!!

*Cam*

I swear I thought I reviewed this! Gah! Sorry... forgive me?

I liked this. You write well, but instead of setting it up like a script... you might want to write the convos and tenses out normally.

Hannah: My name's Hannah Leann good night

to...

"My name's Hannah Leanne. Good night," Hannah said before heading out the door.

Jack closed the door behind her. Hannah's eyes felt heavy as they surrendered to the darkness...

Am I making sense? lol. I liked this though, and I hope you keep going!

~/Addy/~