Great characterization about Robin... I loved to read his thoughts/feelings about the other Titans and their relationships to Raven and to see his competitive side and his need to have Raven all to himself.
And the Slade aspect was good as well... I absolutely adored the way you showed the darker side of Robin... truly wonderful... ^_^
No, I don't think this was too dark, and yes, I enjoyed this very much. I could just imagine what Robin would do to Slade if he hurt Raven. How about come more Rob/Rae stories. Thanks...Gerry