Great poems. Nice change of format and words for the "Eldorado" poem. It sounds nice. You might want to reformat so that readers can see the rhyme more easily.
T Spoon 8/4/00 . chapter 1
Wow! These are fantastic, you really have a talent there! They are hard on the eye though so you might want to put them in a different format. Great job though overall! You really describe the characters!