The part where Piccolo said; "Don't look at me. I may be based on plant, but that doesn't mean I'm any good for eating." is very funny.

wow...

awesome...

Poor Tomic she was forced to stay by Piccollo side... thank God that it all turnd out ok...

lol this is hilarious tyhe younger vegetaa and bulma interaction lol!!

Great job as usual, I have to say, I felt intitled to go back and reread this story. I love how you portray Vegeta and Raditz, this chapter always made me laugh.

wow...

I loved it...

You are great author specially how you can combine 2 stories together...

I can't wait to read your next chapter...

wow...

awesome...

I loved it specially how you have the same troyline but with afew differtences...

I can't wait for the next one...

I really enjoy reading your stories. My favorite Characters happen to be Vegeta and Raditz and i noticed you mainly write stories on either or both. It so hard to come by a RaditsxOC and i really enjoy reading yours, it is by far, the best one i have read so far. I have read the first story to this one and it had me hooked. I wish there were other good Radits fics, but in alot of people give him the shadow... its so sad. If you know any good ones feel free to tell me i would be eternally grateful!

-Vlade

This is a pretty good story. It should have way... more reviews than it has!

What upz like the story. U seem u like Radtiz alot. Don't worry I like Radtiz alot to! Oh and keep up the good work

This story was really good and i enjoyed reading it. But i think you should move it to dbz fanfictions instead because you'll get more reviews. Well i will be forward to reading an update soon.