Omigosh, you're back! And with more absolutely adorable work. Poor Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan, always blaming themselves for everything...

Anyway, it's great to have you back writing. Dare we hope for an update soonish in The Unchosen? I've been suffering from Qui+Obi fluff-withdrawal lately; don't vanish again!

aww... :3 that was so beautifully written!!

Your story is so touching. I loved the comparison of Obi Wan as a little birdling. How Aui Gon came to finally understand their differences and to honor them was so well done.

Aw, that was so sweet. Very uniquely and lovenly portrayed. Gah, *claps* well done!

That was very sweet. You always capture scenes and emotions so well. It's so good to read more of your stuff!

Your description was very good, especially at the begining. I really like how Qui-Gon began to appreciate what Obi-Wan likes, and vice versa. The end made me say "aw".

AWESOME!

So beautiful and deep. I love the relationship you show between Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan...makes me hate the ending of Episode 1 even more. *pouts*

I love the visionary in your story...especially the parts about the moon. Very similar to my own feelings of night which made this story especially meaningful to me.

Great job!

You always have a unique perspective and hey, the style is cool too. Very descriptive to boot.

This was absolutely gorgeous, May. I loved the style, the idea, ah! Just everything was perfect as usual. Great job!

Regards,
K.Elessar

Mm, love it.