Nice. I liked it.

Oh, I love this. Brilliant!

Adorable, funny, and completely sweet. Only you could pull off the perfect combination of those qualities in a relatively short one-shot story.

"Upgrade of data about Jedi needed immediately." Hilarious!

And kudos to your darer, Mousche. Nicely creative. I especially enjoyed hearing the story from the droid's point of view. That was certainly new, and definitely interesting.

Keep writing! I'm back to checking on you regularly again... Don't worry, that wasn't intended to sound like a threat.

I liked it! :) loved the drama.

How very good! You did quite well on the dare I imagine! I like the keeping track of each second and the way movement is described. Very well done!

Ooh this story sounds really wicked. Very suhweet idea of writing. My only plea is for you or someone to puhlease, puhlease continue it! This story is here is worth the while, a piece of coal ready to be made into a diamond, please continue.

Good fic! I liked it a lot. I hope you've done more of those challenges...i'm gonna have to go check and see what else you've written...good job!

This is great! I smiled the whole time! Both are really in character and it kind of gives you a glimps into their relationship as Master and Padawan before TPM.

I would actually like more to this...but you probably want to stick to the challenge. I would like a prequel describing the grenade scene, though!

Funny. Loved the tech notes!

That was cute. Your writing never ceases to entertain and impress.

Real good. I can definitely see them doing something like this.

Loved it. Is there more?

Another excellent piece. I find that challenges will often spark the mischief in us as well as the awesomeness. Silliness too. This one is up to your very able talent and I much thought it was excellent. Did I say that already? Bears repeating.

Wow, that was so creative and such a wonderful idea for the challenge! I'll have to go over to the Boards to check out the other responses as well. How wonderful. Great job, once again!

Regards,
K.Elessar