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| wolf guardian of light 2008-06-11 ch 38,  | abuseARGH! Another Cliffhanger! Please update this soon! If you ask me, Lilia just asking for trouble... :D Are you planning on making Darc and Delma kiss? I'd love to see how they explained THAT to the group! |
| Leif 2008-05-19 ch 38, anon. | abuseI'm still with ya I was just wonderin if ya was ever gonna write another chapter... keep it up |
| LinkRue 2008-05-15 ch 38, | abuseThank u for finnaly writing a new chapter i had been waiting for ages. I think this is one of the best TOS fan fics here |
| Aria7 2008-05-06 ch 38, | abuseNo worries about the long wait, I apologise for the long time in between reviews. But hurrah new chapter! :) Darc was great as always in this chapter, being the sullen Drakyr we all love. To be honest I like the fact that you've got everyone in character. There's not many ToS (and Arc series) stories but I honestly think this is the best or if not THE best then one of. My one quick nitpick is it's Windalf not Windolf. ;) Otherwise, thank you very much. |
| Random Zaku Pilot 2008-05-05 ch 38, | abuseZaku is still here just been napping... wow what happens next must read more now my mind is over drive Kool Aide+Pixie Sticks Must I say more... |
| Stormshark 2008-04-30 ch 38, | abuseYay your back. |
| Lunarspirit 2008-04-28 ch 38, | abusecliff-hanger T_T I hope the pyron comes soon maybe its having firbles! Lost puupy thats a good description of her its very true as well Whats up with Darc? OMG a big fight? cliff-hangers :( |
| LordxxAxelxxLover 2008-04-28 ch 38, | abuseYosha! You updated!! But...another cliffie?! Yo'sa gotta update soon, yo! I wanna find out what Darc's gonna do! >XD |
| cool-people-suck 2008-04-28 ch 38, | abuseI'm still here!! Way to leave it at a cliffy :P Please update whenever you're ready!! |
| LinkRue 2008-02-05 ch 37, | abusethis is an amazing story but longer chapters would still be nice plz keep writing this story |
| LinkRue 2008-02-04 ch 8, | abusethis is a very well written story if the chapters were longer is the only improvment i can think of |
| LinkRue 2008-02-04 ch 6, | abusei love your story but ijust dont usually review |
| LinkRue 2008-02-04 ch 2, | abuseyour characters are very true to the game...and it is a very nice story |
| cool-people-suck 2008-01-13 ch 37, | abuseoh man i can't believe forgot about this story! i think i reviewed a while back.. but now i'm gonna put it on story alert :D definatly one of the best Arc Tos fics!! I love the Derc interaction :) and Khargette is always good!! |
| buzard 2008-01-07 ch 37, anon. | abusei love your story ! my favorite couple is darc/delma. they are so making for the other . when i play of "arc le clan des deimos" (sorry i don't know the name in the english version) i love play with delma she has a temper. after that i love kargh/ paulette couple . ther is only a feew fanfic with them (snif). i don't love lilia she is too perfect for me (like rinoa in ff8). i love a heroine who is still human and not the perfect woman . for me in arc the heroines are paulette and dema . i am so happy to not have to play with lilia but if i must play with her i think i just let her die like i have making with rinoa (laught). so i hope to read the next chapter soon . good luck and see you soon .bye |