Short but sweet... i like it... Not to take your glory but check out my stories... they are rhylee brought me back and paige i love you... okay... REALLY GREAT STORY!

whoa. That was wierd. Don't really like the marco/spinner pair but you still have great writing

aww :) so cute...and a lovely song

Whoa... that was amazkng, yet intense. Spinner being gay is not something that I would usually expect to happen. I like how you intersected his dream and 'reality'. One thing that I noticed was that your commas were a little off. The comma goes before the closing question mark, unless there's an exclamation point or question mark. Oh, and thanks for reading an reviewing my fic! Great work! :)

Are you seriously just leaving that as a one shot?!...it has potential...have you at least thought about continuing it?!...lol I liked it, but I think it could go so many places!

This is really good. I'm usually not a fan of marco/spinner, but I like the way you put this together, so it was a pairing, but not really. It was really really good. =)

i really like it, you should conintue