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CobaltHeart 2008-05-27 . chapter 1
Wow if I was Hinata I'd of hit Sasuke in the beginging. But oh well poor Sasuke
DeviantSupaSoldier 2008-04-09 . chapter 1
Aw poor sasuke he's never gonna get ne at this rate. ;)
winry rockbell0 2007-10-14 . chapter 1
LMAO poor sasuke! XD LMFAO
tartar12345 2007-01-26 . chapter 1
Lol so funny...poor Sasuke!
gigi=] 2006-08-07 . chapter 1
LMAO!
KittyLawnmower 2006-07-16 . chapter 1
Aw, poor Sasuke.

... but LOL.
Atsuatsu 2006-07-11 . chapter 1
Kill the evil bitch Tsunade! She is evil in this story!Still pretty good oneshot*coughburnpaperworkandskipdogpoopcough*Ahem.:P
oztan 2006-05-10 . chapter 1
Poor Sasuke & Hianta.

I hope you write more Sasuke/Hinata fictions.
Ladii-Chocolate 2006-05-07 . chapter 1
Aww, poor Sasuke! *hugs him close* I'm willing to scoop dog poo with you! ...Okay, maybe not.

Ortuna-dear, this was bloody amazing. I love the 'hump romantically' bit the best. I only wish they could've gotten around to doing the dirty-dirty. :D Ah, well. So much for wishful thinking.

Thanks for such a pleasant read!

Ladii-Chocolate
juliagulia1017 2006-05-05 . chapter 1
gads... i don't know what's worse... the uchiha genocide or him not getting some~!!

but seriously... is fate THAT cruel? *snorts*

oh, you're positively WICKED, ortuna~!!
iLychLuna 2006-05-02 . chapter 1
Poor Sasuke~~*come here Sasuke*

He had been waiting for this..and then *poop* he had to do something..Bad bad luck! wah~You should include the Lemons...I'm craving for Sasuhina lemons now. =)

But I love your idea for this story and it was very well written. And your humor is just fantastic..XDD

Keep up the good work and goodluck with your future works.
kenshinlover2002 2006-05-02 . chapter 1
Tsunade is so horrible, I can't believe her sending Sasuke to do that and on his honey moon. Sasuke and his bad luck.
KamikazeUdon 2006-05-02 . chapter 1
so freaking funny. interesting usage of teh term 'hump romantically.' there's not much to criticize, except for teh lack of vocabulary, but then this isn't SAT-prep.
Angeli Rose 2006-05-02 . chapter 1
^^ AIYA! GACKT! I LOVE HIM!

But the ONE things that shut me down in this story was... ;_; YOU CUT OFF THE LEMONY SCENE! >_< PUH-LEASE! I know how this story is finished but CONTINUE!1 ;__; I'm craving for sasuhina at the moment...
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