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Reviews for: The Things That I Want
Agr
2006-05-04 . chapter 1
I'm kinda sad that this story is already complete...

It's been a while since some one has submitted a first-person perspective story and I hope you will pursue it in other submissions.

Regardless, you took a creative concept and ran with it. I already read Lessons, and I hope you submit something else soon.
junyortrakr
2006-05-04 . chapter 1
That was well done.
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