Great job! It was really enjoyable!

Nice man, there was only one part where I got confuesed on who was talking (just because they both had accent marks!) bu other than that I liked it alot. But then again, almost everything Jak rocks... and everything with Jinx in it is the BOMB (pun intended) I liked it (in a MANLY way) Keep up the good work!
~Tony

*snerks*

Why do I not have you on my alerts list? Why? this is a problem that is to be fixed!

Anywhoo, nicely done, as per usual. It's fun reading accents. Even if they're just sleepy ones. And I'm horrible at picking out all the nice little details that make a good fic so you're stuck with just getting a silly grin outta me.

Nice. *This* is why Jak and Jinx are my favorite Jak couple! They can both hang out and be smart asses, and it works, because Jak's already used to Daxter making quips all the time! Jinx just allows him a little more time to get a word in edgewise. (heehee) I liked the way you ended it, too. Yeah, they like each other. In the manly way. Yeah. ;)

Yes, completely manly...right. Nice story though

Hah, witty. It's always an entertainment with Jinx around and when you stick Jak in the picture it gets better. But I loved the topic of conversation that they were having and the way they tease. Loved this piece. :D

That was an awesomesauce piece of writing. I love the Jinx/Jak pairing. I'm not like, stalking you or anything, but you're definitely one of my favorite authors on this site. Keep up the good work! ^_^

GREAT WORK ON THE STORY! CONTINUED!