I love the new one!

I just read your whole story and I would like to see it done! :) I like it very much! I can just imagen her coming back, being more mature and may be a little changed. I really hope you will work more on the fic :)

Oh my god! I want that so bad! Sex on the hood of a car at the beach in a lightning storm! That is the best sex scene ive ever read! Now i just have to try it out! Wow you rock! Thats some creativity! Awesome!

I love this story! I love dom n letty stories but vince is one of my fave characters and there arent many stories of him! Plus i like tempests personality! She rocks!

Don't know if you are sitll reading these but... Wanted you to know that I am really loving this story and can't wait to get tho the next one. My only problem with it is that reading it is taking time from me writting mine. lol
Thanks and please keep writting.

Im really liking this story. Vice as one of the main people is great, along with your character develoepment of him and Jesse and of course Temptest.
More disvription of what things look like to give the reader a feel of beeing there is the only thing I feel is missing some times.
But like I said loving it...will review more at end.

As always a beautiful ending to an excellent story. I would love another story simply bc i live reading your stories but at the same time i don't know if Vince deserves a second chance!

I have stuck with you for a long time and even sent you pathetic emails during your break begging for more of this story, in particular. I am thrilled you are back and writing again.
This is THE story that made me fall in love with Vince to start with. This story gave me an insight to the REAL Vince, the good, the bad, and the temperamental. I love that you didn't make Vince too sweet or too refined. You pointed out every rough edge and unpolished surface of his facade and taught me to appreciate all the things about him that just make me want to scream now and then.
The story of Tempest and Vince is not over. Their story can't possibly end this way. It is just too sad and they haven't even gotten through to the anger stage of the grieving process yet. (You know that eventually they will both come up with a really good reason to be ** and start looking for ways to get even.) Please give the lovable lunk-head a chance at happiness or a the very least maybe forgiveness.
Please? (Don't make me beg shamelessly...cause I will and it is NOT a pretty sight, trust me!)

OMG...wipes the tears...I can't believe it ended like that. I've followed and anticipated every chapter, I've even tried to follow it on the other forums (afgm). I'm conflicted. I'm happy for you that you finished it...but at the same time I want to know the rest of the story. So here goes my attempt...PLEASE CONTINUE!

Aw continue! I miss Vince! Bahahah is is sucha nerd about feelings...

This is a story that I have fallen in love with, I've read it several times over and over. I would love to see it continue there's definitely a feeling of incompleteness if thats a word lol. I do hope to see, in the near future, a continuation... Please? :)

To be continued? I sure as hell hope so! I've enjoyed this story very much, you took a break for a while and I'm glad you came back! Great work!

please please please do a sequel! this is one of my fav stories and i would love to see it continued. thank you for your writing..its very entertaining

loved it!
sequel?

please please start the second part.
one of my favorite stories on here