Okay, I don't know how I missed your story before but I started reading and I am hooked. I love your version of season 8! I'm still reading but I had to stop and put a quick review in for ch 4 b/c I couldn't stop laughing after they were all arguing and Kelso continues on.."and then I said, "The cheese guy? How could you hook up with the cheese guy?.." OMG, I was lmao..okay I'm off to read more..You are great at comedy..OK ..I'll be back.

Wow! Let me just tell you again how much I love this story! I love how everyone is always in character and that you remember details from the past (Donna and Eric and their twinkies!). You should seriously have been an actual writer for the show! I loved Hyde's letter too, it was very much a Hyde-like letter, not all mushy and lovey, but real and honest. I hope he and Jackie can work it all out! Can't wait for more!

Twinkies will not solve our problems Donna- ok, i have to disagree. twinkies can solve any problem...its those damn twonkies that are the trouble makers! lol, i'd of never thought that officer walters would be one to indulge. nice twist! oh, and BURN! jackie knows now!

i swear this story just gets better and better. You definately know how to keep people hanging. I am patiently (ok, not so patiently) awaiting the next chapter. :)

yes! i have a feeling that the next chapter will lead us closer to the part where things will all go KABLOOEY! and then come crashing down, i wonder how jackie will react when she finds out what peter did. hm, i also love how you showed both Red's softy side as well as his smart ass side. this would have made a humorious episode!

good chapter

Uh oh! I can't wait to find out what's in the letter! I loved the Shotzie return too! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Go Schotzie! Man, I can't believe that Peter is so insecure that he had to do that...and I assume steal the ring from Hyde! Jerk. Bring on the reunion!

lol hyde's trying to break into Barnett's safe with no luck...you know, peter may be sneaky but jackie is smart. and i have a feeling that if no one in the basement finds that note, jackie's going to put the pieces of the puzzle together herself sooner or later.

yeah! next chapter the same day I read the last chapter! I love it! I hope Jackie gets the letter soon.

OMG! You can not leave it here... I'm going to go crazy! This is such a great story! Please post the next chapter soon!

Please update! :-)

lol, oh burn! you burnt leo's brownies! hm i wonder if hyde's letter to jackie was somewhat simular, lets see that next chapter and find out.

Yet another great (but sad) chapter! Everyone's leaving! I can't wait to find out what Hyde's letter to Jackie says. I know I say this a lot, but you are awesome- more, more, more, please!

I love it! update soon please