heyy james nice fan fictionn write more gosh lol jk laterr skaterr xo angelaa

no i am only third because you like that rebecca girl yo
andd change my name from yurshmexy to lexydarling kthanks

Not your best chapter, sorry. But I hope i don't die!

Hey dude killer im seriously hooked and cant wait for the next chap. ill keep my eyes peeled. keep writing ~r Bffs evil insane twin

Jamise, Dahling, you frighten me. I think you will frightnen me until the day I die. And that was in no way mushey~ Take it from the fluff Princess writng this. If You want I'll send you real fluff...

Not to bad. Always loving me and Remus, of course, but it was kind of rushed if you ask me. Slow it down and add more dialogue please.

Hey awsome but one question WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER? lol i really liked it but make longer chapters too. lol l8rs dude

cut back onn all the detailss yo and omg

LILY AND JAMES FOREVERR

luv the fic
it rox
plz pdate asap

Really good plot! Your paragraphs are kinda hard to read, though. And you know it's Lily, not Lilly, right?

Not to bad, except you called her Lily Potter and you spelt her name Lilly. The really big paragraphs were confusing

beautiful dahling, simply spiffy. I'm holding this story up like it's the quidditch world cup because it's the sex! yes, i use my dialouge from my story coz i wrote it...hmm...which i need to update...i don't know why i didn't find this before, because i usually read these kinda storys...well anyway can you space the next chapter ou, this one was giving me a headache coz i had to read so closly. Anyway, private message me later.
and a lot of my chapters with be confuzzling. esepically the ones that r songchaps! hahaha, i made a new word! :P
xlovexlifexcheeseburgersx biznitch!

No too hideous. And Remus is MINE. Lol. Anyway, you're going to have to put lliy througha whole denial of her feelings stage otherwise this will suck (no offense) Yes it was a mush ball, but not to hideous, I swear. - Victori@