this is a wonderful story. are you ever going to update it? it would be fantasitc to hear both the girls' and the boys' stories.

Could you please update? I would really like to see more of this.

Wonderful. Love the idea, and Peter's song to Susan, and little Lucy taking everything in hand. Hope you write more!

hey I love this story its very cool. I love reading stories about Peter,Susan, Edmund, and Lucy bonding as sisters or brothers or as a fanmliy(sp), because its so sweet and cute. please update soon!

It's nice to read a fic that is centred around Lucy and Susan. PLease write more.

Very good! It does seem like Peter and Edmund get to have all the fun, and be on the front line for battle. Anyway please continue soon love it and putting it in my favorites.

Hehe. Well, this'll be interesting to see... Are you planning to follow Susan and Lucy's adventures, or stick with Edmund and Peter, or do some of both? Anyhow, good start.
-Scott

you gonna keep writing?

good start! i like it!

A very good start. I love seeing Susan and Lucy getting an adventure. It's a nice change, and I especially love the Su-Lu bonding. Please update soon.

very interesting. can't wait to read more. you've got my interest piqued

Okay, so I will of course be doing one of our line for line reviews for you, but I can't do that here so I'm just going to say *Thank you so much* for writing this beautiful story for me! I love it, it totally made me tear up. It means so much to me, I can't tell you. You're a real inspiration, both to me and to so many other people on this site... And as you have already been told, you are so prolific! I'm constantly amazed at the volume and quality of your work. I don't know how you do it... if I could only stop talking to you for long enough to get my next fic written... but I'm having too much fun!

Just for the record everyone, it's all Francie's fault I've been so non-productive of late, she keeps distracting me! But I think that this fabulous story more than makes up for it. Keep em coming, girl x

You are the Lucy in *my* life x

*Squee* (How gushy can I get?) Love ya x

You have the characterization down pat, you really do! I have to admit that I tend to like Lewis' male characters better than his female ones, at least in Narnia, but I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of this story. One thing that I noticed right off the bat was all the interaction between Susan and Lucy and your excellent portrayal of the sisterly relationship between them. It was then that it really hit me how many fics there are that explore the relationship between Peter and Edmund and how few there are that deal with Susan and Lucy in this way.

But I still hope that the boys get a few scenes.

Update soon!

Whoa... somebody's prolfic. Though I think you told me that once. Anyway, this should be a fun ride. The girls get a vacation, and it sounds like the boys aren't exempt from adventure either. Can't wait to see how it goes!

Oh, this is different. I liked it a lot! You are going to show both the Girls' and the Boys' adventures, right? The boys are going to be driven crazy by home-life, aren't they? Plz update rlly soon, BYE!