Liked your story. It would be interesting to read Part I.

This story is very interesting.I read this a while back not long after reading the first part to it.
Marks Uncle Pat the Mob Guy had Mark kidnapped and he got Mark to promise not to say anything about his Uncle Pat leaving the country before the police find him and arrest him.He fixed it with Mark so that Mark is his Lawyer so as his Lawyer he cant give out information of his Client.
I hope there will be more to the story.

JeanneZ84

This story was really good. I enjoyed it.

See? The second time it just gets easier, right? Well, okay, maybe 'easy' isn't exactly right, but once those ideas get stuck in your head, you just have to get them out, so you just go with the flow. :-)

You know, I like Uncle Pat, but I'm beginning to think maye HC is right; it might be better for Mark if he stayed away. It's not completely jealously that makes the judge think so, either, it just seems that being too close to a mobster can be hazardous to one's health and well-being. Still, maybe one little visit wouldn't hurt anything . . .

It's always good to see Frank, trying to help however he can, and I thought Vince was an interesting guy. Maybe Pat coud hire him for security down at his villa.

It'll be interesting to see the completion of the trilogy, and finally resolve some of this tension. And, the boys will get a vacation to boot!

I really enjoyed this story, although I tend to prefer stories that have a little more action in them. This one was all angst. The ending scene between Mart and the judge seemed a little lacking...they kept talking about resolving their discussion, but they never really did anything, except put it OFF again. The very ending, with Judge Hamilton, though, was great!

I am reviewing the entire story together since that is how I read it. I thought it was a great part 2 to the story with Uncle Pat.

I loved the interaction between the judge and Pat, with each one questioning the other's intentions for Mark. Pat did admit that he was using Mark as a substitute for the children he no longer gets to see. ANd then he confronted the judge with his loving Mark as a sin, but refusing to tell him that and the fact that he was proud of him. Loved it.

Then the judge went along with Pat and let him get Mark back safely, because he sensed it was the only way. Then when he gets Mark back, he thinks he might take Mark to visit his uncle. Then when they get home, he lays into Mark about having contact with his uncle. This was the man who just gave him the kid back. I admit that the man has a very bad past, but he has left it all behind.

I did like that you ended it the way you did, but it would have been nice to see Judge Hamilton;s reaction to the story.

I hope there is more with Uncle Pat. Please keep writing.

Great story!! What imagination! I didn't expect Mark to be kidnapped, but I was so pleased that it was Pat, who rescued him. I hope they get to visit Uncle Pat, but I also hope they leave Katrina back home.(hey if it can't be ME, it shouldn't be anybody!)ha-ha!
This is one of those "special" stories that I will read, and re-read. Maybe if they visit uncle Pat, he will have to get them BOTH out of trouble! I can't wait for part I. Thanks for a great story.

Ann

Another interesting chapter in the continuing saga of Uncle Pat. Keep writing.

I love this story and wish it would continue on-and-on. It could be like a mini-series or soap opera or something. I like "uncle Pat", and don't want the feds to get him, but I hope he and Mark will be able to meet and have a good relationship, in spite of his previous, illegal activities. This is a good story that needs to continue, and who is the woman in the photograph, and what is her relationship to McCormick?
Please continue the story, as I am enjoying it so much!
Thanks...
Ann

Okay, but this is just a short story -- post the whole thing! You think we're gonna wait through multiple chapters like last time; gimme a break!

:-)