Poor Snape...bunny's putting funky hearts in his mouth. At least he gets to kiss Hermione...it could be worse, far worse...he could have had to kiss Dumbledore *shudder* (Too much time in the Arizona heat for me!)

And as for Arizona, I'm with you!! I Can't stand it here!! any insults you can come up with, I probably will too at some point if I haven't already! (been here for 10 years, I'm good at insulting this place)

horny teenagers

Pucker up for me sevvie!

"No ** Sherlock" omg that is just to funny!

HELL YEAH! you wrote another chapter.

*TEAR TEAR* cause I'm laughing so hard.

For some reason picturing everyone stuck in the same room all as you said PLAYING TONSEL HOCKEY with ** evil lil bunnies roaming is pretty damn halarious. So as for you thinking it's not funny your so ** wrong.

I'm one of those people that still after seeing Dumb and Dumber 10,0 times I still laugh my ** off every time.

Thank you for updating this but I'm still sad it's over *hint hint*LOL!

Your Faithful Reader
green-eyed-angel

Well you asked for flames...

You need a beta, or at least you need to read what you write before posting it, because there are many grammar and spelling errors as well as sentences that just plain don't make sense. Everybody's out of character (not that that's saying much because you most likely intended it, but it's just one more thing to criticize). The rating is wrong too, it can't be K+ because of language. The characters are poorly developed, the plot, if it can even be called that, is hardly explained, and on a whole I didn't find it even remotely funny.

However, if you take more time writing it, it really could develop into a good story. I mean, it IS a good idea.

P.S. Don't get mad at me for what I wrote. You asked for it, and besides, the above is more like harsh constructive criticism than actual flames.

...odd...

LOL. funny, Hey I happen to like Arizona! But it does get hotter than hades there.
-A.P.

M I love it more more more more PLEASE!

GREEN-EYED-ANGEL

ah pink fluffy bunies thats wrong o so many levels. Made me laugh though so all is well. grins sheepishly... please continue and if you think arazion bad try cornwall it a hell hole in the middle of nowhere

LOL! I think it's HILARIOUS! Plz update soon. I wanna see how the stroy unfolds.
-A.P.

continue please, hermione to save the day!

I'm gonna quote Sev kinda well I'm gonna ue one of his words this fic is so ** funny so far love it more PLEASE!

green_eyed_angel