This story could have potential. The only thing I'm going to complain about is the spelling/grammar. You might run a spellchecker or re-read things before you post them for simple your/you're-type mistakes. The execution of the story is good and the concept of the story is one I haven't seen before. Please do update.

You should definatly continue, it's really good! Please update soon. It already looks like you have a pretty good plot and everything, so please update!!

~dani~

Hey,
I am confused as to who to write this to but I think tell your friend thats its good, and I like it. I love Adam stories too, so keep it up. Update soon.

Yeah, thanxs for putting up my story, luv you lots, dont know why it wont let me put it up on my account, i guess i need to get MW again so I can, *gives Misty a couple of cookies* ^_^