Okay, I apologise in advance if this review is posted twice...I wrote you this long-** one and then tells me it had an error processing my request...I'll give them error...just kidding...

Anyway...I"m really glad I stumbled across this fic, I was completely glued to the screen the whole time. Always having been a fan of DW and Negs, I was seriously intrigued by this story. It was so STRONG. I really appreciate the fact that you toyed with traditional narrative techniques, your storytelling abilities are awesome. Your imagery is also topnotch - you know how to create a scene. Sometimes things get a little verbose, but I can't talk as I do the same thing.

I love the interactions between the two Drakes. You really created something unique with these characters. My favorite thing had to be the dialogue - very intense and natural. While I thought there should have been more closure on Negs' behalf (that's just personal bias), I really found it interesting that you ended the story where it begun. The whole thing was so weird and unsettling - greatness. Thanks for providing me with such an interesting read!

I'm so confused. Question: What the Sam Hill happened at Lanton's? DW and LP aren't...yeah, that's just sick. But what in the world happened to Negs?

This...is weird...but somehow intriguing...so onward I read.

Interresting. I'm a little curious as to what is going on with Drake, but I guess time will tell...

I trully loved this story!! Well written, and well thought out!! That's how Darkwing and Lord Negaduck would react to each other if they were locked in the same room!

Yes, I do have quite a collection of Darkwing Duck stuff--but there is no Lord Negaduck collectibles!

Always love the Lord Negaduck and Darkwing Duck stories! I always can't wait for another author to write a Negaduck story!

Another Great Chapter, loved the body slam Lanton gave Lord Negaduck!!

Can't wait to find out how the twins are going to get out of this predictiment.

Another totally awesome chapter!! Again the interaction between Darkwing and Lord Negaduck is great!! There is a lot of psychology in this story! I think Darkwing has finally realized that he has a lot more in common with his "twin" then he cares to admit and accept!

Great Great Story!

Really great reference to the Malice's Restaurant! I thought Lord Negaduck would have torn the place apart!! At least he torn the head off at least one of the stuffed bunnies. Really great interaction between the twins. I always loved how Negaduck and Darkwing Duck bickered and fought!! Lord Negaduck always did know how to get to Darkwing especially with that comment about Launchpad!!

Wow, I love your description of Saint Canard "...it just that this happened to be St. Canard, the largest cesspool for debauchery, corruption, and maliciousness on the east coast. At the same time though, crimes like petty theft, car jacking, jewelry store robberies hardly ever happened. Reason being, St. Canard had the second highest number of lunatics and madmen in the country..." It sounds like you are describing New Jersey! Except, car jacking, breakins, armed robberies, murders, go on everyday, and yes we do have the most corrupt politicians in the country! Except our "paradise" is either being paved over or what parks are left are being overrun with drug dealers, trash, filth, etc!

Oh well I'll get off my soap box and get on with the review!! Great chapter, poor Darkwing can't even relax in the park without something or someone disturbing his peace and quiet. Love the introduction of Lord Negaduck!

Well, I can see things are very normal at the Mallard house--Launchpad watching TV, Gosalyn booby trapping the house and playing soccer, and of course Drake/Darkwing always moaning and complaining about something!!

Excellent Story--Can't wait to read on--Especially since it's a Darkwing/Negaduck Story! Big fan of both don't ya know!! I must read all Darkwing/Lord Negaduck fanfics!

I have to say, I'm totally confused! There seems to be a gap somewhere. Who was Lanton really, and what was it in Launchpad's eyes? Btw, what color is honey? Every other fanfic says LP has blue eyes and Gos has green. For anyone who doesn't know me and is reading this review, I have to ask these questions about colors; I've been blind since birth and know very little about color descriptions.

Oh, one more question Anna? Why do you say LP's eyes swirl? Was there something wrong with Drake's vision in that scene?

This is out there! It's crazy! I love it! Please write more soon!

Great googily moogily... This place is whacked. I can't wait to find out what all this is about, Lanton is a very unnerving character. He's strange, and what is his plan? Oh dear, I can't wait to see how this all comes together. Please update/finish soon!

This sibling-like relationship is hilarious! Nice touch about adding Gos as a conversation's topic.

Keep the good writing.

Ah! I ache to know what is going on! This place is crazy and Negs is being semi-well behaved? Your wording is so enthralling and I cannot wait to see what lies ahead! And... damn Tiffy sure loves bunnies doesn't she?