You should've expanded it! Too compressed! Oh my heart! You could've made it where Bulma had brain damage and forgot somethings but she knew she loved Vegeta so Vegeta had to take care of her and... well you get it!

That was really cute!

that was funny

LOL! Way to go Goku! And it's cool how you kept Vegeta and Bulma in character the whole time. Love it! I hope to see more like this from ya.

( Bounces around ) OWH OWH OWH .. MAKE A SEQUAL .. MAKE A SEQUAL .. MAKE A SEQUAL .. MAKE A SEQUAL !

:)

CUTE! That was sweet & funny!

(snickering) That was so cute! You got Goku absolutly perfectly! 25 kitty treats for you!

Kawaii! That was so unbeleivabley cute and funny!

too short, but as long as you make it up to me and your other readers i guess it will be ok!

Woah Syd! That was great! Write more! Please! That was awsome!

GO SYD! I LOVE IT! Alright! My MP and MT should be up in a few days too! THREE CHEERS FOR SYD! YEAH! GO SYDD!

Love your BFF Lor

SYD! It rulz..hmmmmmm.I think I said that for the first half...oh well.It's true! Goku is sooo hilarious! Keep it up, sista! LOL! _!

LYLAS...still!

Syd! This rulz! It is really good for a first fic! There are a couple of typos though0 Anyways..keep writing Chika!

LOLness at Chi-Chi_!OMK...I forgot to say that you stink for making it a cliffhanger...j/k! LYLAS!

write more or i will never read another of your stories again. HA!