This is the single best military-style KP fic on the site. It's unfortunate that you seem to have stopped writing.

Thanks for the great read!

Aedan

This rocks!

o man. i really like what you have created here. you have put my two favorite things together, Halo and Kim Possible. when i started reading this i got really excited and i just couldn't stop. it's 5:30 am now and i can say that i really want you to continue on what you have here. you have a lot of room for story development since its a new planet with a whole lot of room for history on what happened on the planet. you hinted to the Flood and that can go a long way also in this. Ron meeting up with Kim also leaves a lot of room and maybe even a romance or sorts. and if you get this but decided that nothing is going to come of this then tell me cuz i dont want to keep hoping you continue.

Really tweaked you stopped but still loving it,
Ernest.

This is a very good story. I can't help wondering if this Kim and Ron will find out about their hero ancestors back on earth. Anyway. Keep up the good work.

Nice idea, using the 'March of Cambreadth' in the Haloverse!

damn fine work though I personaly woud like to see ron in spartan armor with rufus as the AI

Good sir this story is, in my humble opinion, the best piece of written fiction ever (that incudes Tom Clancy). It seems to channel Battlestar Galactica in all the right ways, the drama, the action, the characters (Ron is like the Adamas, Helo, and Jack O'Neill put together, and thats a good thing), the relationships (I see so much of Kara and Lee, or Sam and Jack if you prefer, in Kim and Ron it's not even funny, it's enthralling), and the tech (the UNSC is almost on equal footing with the Covenant, but the Covies still hold enough of a edge to win most battles).

My only request with this story is that you put in more parts that show Cmdr. Stoppable truly excelling at his job. It just dosn't seem right to have him go from 'though as nails military genius' to 'sidekick' whenever Kim's around. And for the record Cmdr. Stoppable is my favorite fictional character.

I am wonder though how these guys will survive the events of Halo 3, but whatever you have cooking I'm sure I'll love.

Sic Semper Tyrannus
Carry on.

P.S. Yes this is the THIRD time I reviewed this chapter, this time it was done to add this story to my favorites, but will you PLEASE UPDATE ALREADY! I'm burning a hole in my floor waiting for the next chapter.

First: I know nothing about HALO I assume that it's the video game but that's all i know about it.So I have no background on any of what they are fighting.isthe SPARTIN program part of the game as well?
Second:"Starship Troopers:by Robert A.Heinlein one of my all time favorite books and on of the reasons that I joined the military all those years ago.
Third:John Ringo"Hell's Faire" Next on my to read list.
I could follow the battle sequences. I am a passionate reader of David Webber and his"Honor Harrington"series.
Man. What a story.Action,adventure,old loves?maybe?,flight to the death,an implacabble enemy Damn that's good stuff.Is there anyway that I will find out how the SPARTIN program works or how they justify taking a six year old girl from her family and letting them believe her dead? I need more information this is an evcellent series. NEED MORE WANT MORE !

This was a fun story. A little long winded on some part, with technical info, and I skim through some of the battles w/ barkin and Betty to read the KP and Ron sections. However, I'm a fan of Halo and a big fan of KP/Ron. I'd like to see what come next and hope you update soon.

I'm a fan of the Halo game and the series of books. This is one of the better fusion stories that I have seen. Keep up the good work, and update this soon.

haha...im a big fan of both kp and halo and this story is awesome...really liked how u put the kp characters into the halo universe...i liked how u paid homage to the producers/director of kp as well...anyway i was wondering where is will du hahax...shouldnt he be there as well...and im kinda curious...why the number 487 for kim possible?mind filling me in on the significance?anyway...cant wait for the next chapter...rock on dude

No doubt the coolest fusion ever to to be witnessed in this universe. I give it top rating for fusions that involve KP and whatever else. Halo and Kim Possible rock!

I know it's unconventional to say the least to post 2 reveiws for a single chapter, but I just had to say this, and I could not wait until you posted the next chapter to say it. There is a 'Wiki' site called the Halopedea, and it has everything you could possibly want to know about Halo posted on it. Also just wanted to mention that weapons and veichles like the BR55, M7 SMG, T-25 'Spiker', Scarab, Covanent beam rifle, and Brute Chopper have been around long before 2552 (as evidenced by the Halo Wars trailer and other prequals released after Halo 2). Anyways thats all I had to say and sorry for the dual reveiw, update soon.

Stunning, absolutly stunning. This is true literary classic that I just can't stop reading no matter how hard I try.
the characters are engaging and well thought out, and... Ah screw it! The simple fact of the matter is that this story is to fanfiction what Battlestar Galactica is to television, and that is the highist praise I can give ANYTHING! There are a few things in this work that don't match up with the 'offical Halo cannon', but it's all for the best. The UNSC's war with the Covanant dosn't seem totaly hopeless (i.e. MAC guns can punch a 500ft hole in they're warships yet we lost Reach which was armed to the teeth with MACs), but it never detracts from the genuine worry about wather or not the characters will survive until the next chapter (I have a lot emotionaly invested in these characters). The only thing I can honestly complain about is the lack of a regular update time, that would probibly drive your readers into a frenzy of anticipaction.

Beautiful work...Truly..Beautiful work...One of the most seamless and entertaining stories I have read..and its a crossover to boot!...I can imagine that you must have spent a lot of time doing research online and in game manuals for the tech specs of the weaponry and vehicles...Awesome stuff!!

On a technical/literary note...noticed some minor grammer occurences slipped their way into the published work..Nothing major and certainly not detracting from the story in any way...BTW...Where is Rufus??

Again..Beautiful work...Anxiously awaiting the next installment


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