this is really good update plz.

Oh, this fic was different. I see you've used imagery and description instead of using dialogue to write this story and I say very imaginative! I can always rely on you to write something different.

This was an Alternate Universe kind of thing, where Hiei was some kind of merman? His name was never mentioned but I presumed it was so. From the summary, you know.

I like how you managed to structure this story well. There was:

- An orientation (Yusuke's fishing)
- Complication (He gets stuck in the ocean)
- Climax (He gets rescued)
- Resolution (He gets back to shore)

Why do I pay so much attention to little things? I don't know.

um i was wondering if this was a one shot because i would really like it to continue
please update soon
luv the story

Darkfire

go HieixYusuke

OMG! update i love this! i also love disney movies too so that might be why...damn now i have to go to my friends house and get her to let me watch the little mermaid there! mine doesn't work

Hey um... you should update because I've never read a story like this and I'd like to where it goes and...yeah update.. I like it!

Update please?

This looks great! Please finish it! PLEASE!

Ah, this is a cute little story! I like it!! Is there going to be more chapters?? xD I'm gonna have to go read some more HieiYusuke now! lol.

hiei as a merman now thats hott. lets just hope that yusuke doesnt give in to the mermans charm or he cant be with another man again lol.

*takes out knife* Write more. NOW! I'm really loving this story. U better keep it up.

Who... I really like this story, even though the first chapter is the only one up. Please, please update soon!!

Who... I really like this story, even though the first chapter is the only one up. Please, please update soon!!

Who... I really like this story, even though the first chapter is the only one up. Please, please update soon!!

write more please thank you

Hell yeah! This is the second good, new, YusukexHiei fic I've read today. Heck yes!! This is going on the ol' favorites lists. YusukexHiei is the freakin' GREATEST pairing out of...well, darn near every anime. It's too underappriciated to allow me to not try to read every good-potential fic I see escape without being read. Update soon! For the love of God, update soon! By the way, your writing skills are fabulous. I didn't catch a single error. Good...no, excellent job, and keep up the good work.