Lovely.

Kuro and Tomoyo are just ment to be~

It was very,very deep. I liked it.

Very good!
I bet thats what kuro-tan felt.

Aw...that was so sweet...glad u did this-Kurogane and Tomoyo pairings are my FAVE.

Very original! This is the first poem I've ever seen based on Kurogane and Tomoyo. I can totally see Kurogane thinking and feeling those things, but of course never daring to ever voice them... except in a poem! Good, very good! I especially like your perspective! I hope to see more Kurogane/Tomoyo stuff from you!

amazing job with the Poem...i dont usually read poems but this one really caught my attention...it's very deep
keep it up
^_^