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| Intervigilium 2008-07-16 ch 1,  | abuseThis is really good. In a word, it's POWERFUL writing! |
| FluffySmarts 2006-08-09 ch 1, | abusecool. i write devotions. i have one on my ficpress site. anyway-- awesome. ~Liz |
| Veruca 2006-07-26 ch 1, anon. | abusehow is that good? explain to me please... |
| RenegadeRose 2006-05-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseInteresting poem. Of course, even Satan believes in God, and even Satan believes that Jesus is the Son of God and the Saviour of mankind. Even the demons know God and believe in Him. We see this in Scripture. So by "belief" it is important to make clear that this includes doing the will of God, because you believe in Him and His goodness and His perfection and His saving grace... Nice poem though. I liked the ending very much. |
| Lord Cargyle 2006-05-20 ch 1, | abuseI like your very straightforward style. You don't overly sugarcoat it. Good job. Josh |
| -faiths-faithful-fool- 2006-05-04 ch 1, | abuseokay! this is an awesome subject matter. jus one thing gramatically! you have been talking in the present tense right through, and then you say "and belief will have given you what you deserve". should it be "and belief will give you what you deserve"? if not shouldn't deserve be deserved? im not sure myself! i am sorry it is not very clear what i am trying to say! but i hope you get the jist of it and that my comments have helped! god bless -faith- |
| almostinsane 2006-05-03 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem! |