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Reviews For: Crazy Little Thing Called Malaria
Ziva4Tony 2006-05-03 . chapter 1
Nice story thus far, continue, continue. Dianna
wjobsessed 2006-05-03 . chapter 1
Intriuged.
"A night, which to be honest was only 'OK' in bed..." I have to comment on this sentence because I never took it this way. Maybe I'm the last one on earth to think it but I thought it was incredible for them but they never allowed themselves to relish it because of the guilt afterwards.
Anyway, just MHO.

The Lily/Jordan interaction was very good-wish she really would TALK with someone on the show.
Please continue.
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