Well, as a poem it has a slightly immature feel to it, as having been written by someone quite young. But you mention that it was written when you were younger, so that makes sense.
Still, it has some good lines in it, and a good message to it, so nice work...

If Hell is anger, hate, and fear, then Hell is my reality. Hell is naught but a figure of speech and a way to keep children (and adults) frightened into behaving and obeying.

If there is a Hell then we humans have created it, on Earth. On our Earth that we rape and destroy with our worthless ** chemicals, our trash, we rape the earth and violate it with our filth.

But we have created this Hell all the same, on our own, all on our own. And there is no one to blame for this but us.

Wow. Sorry if it's offensive, but you sounded like one of those fire and brimstone Puritan preachers from the Salem trials. Good job, though.

Josh

I won't go to Heaven or Hell. I'll be immortal. How you ask? Because Heaven won't take me and Hell's scared I'll take over ; ) Sewriously though, I'm headed for the Fires. Even almostinsane, who became a friend of mine, agrees that I'll have a hard time getting into Heaven and he sees good everywhere.

Great poem! No one should ever condemn themselves to hell.