powerful.
keep writing.

dat really sucked. you should take it down = P

interesting, i loved it! It sounds ike it's coming from the bible itself, you have a lovely way with words, theres a nice glowing feel to it that i can't explain

Pretty good. I'm not that religious, but I like the simile use. Good job.

Josh

wow! i love this! it is something most of us would do well to remember!

god bless

-faith-

Great poem! This is just heavenly.

That's lovely. I like the imagery.