aww!that was cute.loved it,even if it was short,it stil went nicely!

PlayWizard?! I couldn't stop laughing. Wizard!! Sirius isn't gay right? LOL!!

God, it's such a great story! You have a very special talent for writing; 'cause you wrote this story so fascinating. Some parts were really sad and I almost had to cry and others were so funny that I had to smile at myself. I love this story and I hope you'll write more like this. (Maybe Sirius and Alice will make a great couple?;) )


P.S. I hope you understand what I wanted to tell you. My English isn't so very good because I am from Germany. :)

Aww.
I enjoyed this a lot, a nice little burst of happiness to my day. :)
The break-up really brought out the old Lily and James.
I liked how Sirius and Alice bet on them staying together, which is (hopefully) what all best friends would do.
Please don't take this offensive, but I'm not really sure I liked the whole part about Petunia. But it's not like I could have thought of anything better.
Alright, this is getting long enough!
All in all, AMAZING story, very powerful ending, completely wonderful characterizetions. :D

Much success!
~QE

Another great story, completely brilliant, of course.

I loved it and I cant wait to read another story by you!

aw this story is really cute and really good. It was just what i needed to read. Really, a great story. :D

I loved this story! I love how you threw that fight in there, becuase if they can get past the hard times and the good times, then they WILL live happily ever after!!

Bribles

haha, good chapter and you used Pride and Prejudice! Never did i realize how much James and Lily act like Elizabeth and Darcy. Boy do i love that book! Good metaphor (or anagram, how the hell do i know) for JP and LE.

i like how at the end you said...and potter was pacified.

Aww...adorable! Incredible job...I love J/L stories, and yours was great. The characterizations were exactly as I would believe them to be, and the plot was flawless.

lol I did like it a lot.I hope you write oter stories in the future

Good job, it was certainly enjoyable. ireally like having the best friends in on it too. ANd of course I love your james. please take this as constructive critisism, it lagged a bit when talking about petunia. Who wins the bet?

It was a great story or fanfic but who won the bet Just have to know.

Being me and all.

e-mail me at anthonyhospedales.

so cute
it's a wonderful short story
great job