This was a very original story. I use to be a Traditionalist as far as pairings went..Harry/Ginny etc..but now I think Harry & Luna would be a better match.

anyway well done

:)

Can't wait for that sequel. Wonder what you will come up with for the plot.

Love it

This chapter was really cute, especially the love vow!

You wrote Harry very well, especially his fear of being abused.

The scenes with him and Luna are priceless especially the marriage vow. :-)

I did notice a couple of things:

Ministry - this should always be capitalized since it's the title of a place

Mummy/ Daddy - should be capitalized also

Kudos on a darling chapter

This chapter captured the young innocence of Luna Lovegood really well. I liked that despite her young age she stated facts as if going out on a broom to find a young man is an everyday ocurrance.

It's enjoyable to see Luna's mother have such a strong characters, especially since she is one character very few people write.

I did noticed a couple of things:

"the Dark Lord."

- you had 'dark lord.' But since it is a title that Voldemort is called you should capitalize it.

"Mummy."

- Also, Mummy is a title used by children for their Mom, so it should also be capitalized.

Kudos on a Cute Chapter!

Wonderful Story!

Wonderful Story!

Absolutely hilarious and adorably cute! :)

cheers, cen

Thank you for the reference to Fireball XL5! It was a favorite program of mine as a kid! Am I the only one old enough to have caught it?
I like the story. This is the second time that I have read it. First time that I noticed the reference.
The lead chapters had a little more humor in them, but that is as it should be...the actual time at Hogwarts was a bit darker, less to joke at.
Anyhow, thank you. I like the portrayal of the characters. You make them likable, so that one cares about them...probably one of Rowley's biggest achievements.

Loved it. I would have enjoyed Dumbledore's face when he learned who Harry Lovegood really was. And about the horcruxes, etc.
:D Great job. Fantastic story! Have you considered professional writing?

Loved the scene with Snape, and with Flitwick and Minerva.

! :D

And immensly fun and intriguing story. I loved it :)

I really loved this story. At first I didn't want to read it as I thought it would be more of a silly story full of mini Luna antics who had Harry as a husband. But now, after reading it, I can't say how terribly wrong i was. I loved nearly every aspect of this story.

But I do have a problem with this story though, while Dumbledore was portrayed rather well throughout the whole story, there have been instances where he made terrible lapses in judgment for no apparent reason. For instance the fact that he practically imprisoned Trelawny was rather uncalled for. It didn't really add anything significant to the plot, it rather served to make Dumbledore a gigantic scumbag

I don't know, somehow Dumbeldore didn't seem Dumbledore at the last few chapters, also it seemed kind of cruel of not letting him know that Voldemort is truly dead, as from his perspective he is right. Maybe Selene could have explained it to him, with the extra note of not coming near them anytime soon again.

Other then that, brilliant story, a fantastic read.

SEQUEL TIME! Please? Pretty please? Pretty please with sherbet lemons on top? Actually, I hate those... BUT STILL!

hmm, I must say that I didn't like the fact that Harry apologised and Luna did not...doesn't seem very fair in my book but that could just be me *shrugs*

O, ouch. But hey, it's the truth.