will you continue? and wait an island? hm you better continue

You should continue the story! I would frankly like to know what happens! PLEASE!

goodjob update again soon please

Awsome begining to your Titanic Story! Really want to see what happens next! Well please type out a new chapter soon? Well ttyl! Love the story!

Ok I dont wanna sound like a **, but if your gonna write a story like this you need to know the facts.

Oh and to Robin Sparrow, it was actually a carved oak wall panel, not a door.

Great sotry, but just to tell you a fact or two, Titanic sunk on April 15th, 1912 at 2:20 am. Great story though.

i love this story. I'm so glad you finally updated. you have me worried there for a while. i think its going good. maybe a complication w/ jack's health or something like that. I dunno really.

I'm not sure how Alicia and Jack could survive being at sea in small lifeboat for two days--hypothermia would have already set in and they would've died. Especially without dry clothes and without food.

And, there are no counts in America. There is no nobility at all. So Alicia couldn't marry an American count.

Although I really don't like to read stories from Titanic, this seems interesting. So I hope you can update soon.
~DAP

Um just a random idea:

Jack wakes up. They tell each other about themselves. They try to get off island and fail and start a relationship. They manage to get off the island after a few years and make it back to New York but Jack meets Rose again and he's torn between her and Alicia.

Just an idea.

Lovin' the story btw!! Update soon please!

I like it, I'd love to read more. As far as what you need to do next, just write whatever comes natural. I know that doesn't seem very helpful but the best way to write a story, in my opinion, is to not force yourself to write. Only write when you have the inspiration to. Having other people help you makes it less your story.

I would love to read some more!

Nice. =) It tweaks some facts, though. I'm pretty sure Titanic only had six boats, each able to hold sixty or so people. Also, the crew would know about all of them, so there couldn't possibly be one that they didn't notice or forgot. And it would be pretty much impossible for one person to lower a boat like that from such a great height.

Well, anyway, this is a story, so you can have as much creative licence as you want. =) I'm looking forward to the next chapter. ^_^

Please update soon! I love this story! It has an interesting sorta twist to it!

Indara

hey
Ok
Pretty Good, But I didn't like was that Rose didn't save Jack!!
Keep wrighting!